Take a Chance - Tora/Saga - 4/4

[sentimentalenvy]

Title: Take a Chance
Chapter(s): pt 4/4
Author: sentimentalenvy
Genre: AU/Romance/Comedy/little angst?
Rating: PG-13 *omguh what o: ?*
Warnings: language
Pairing/Characters: Tora/Saga, Shou/Saga (one sided)
Synopsis: Saga is afraid to tell him how he truly feels because there’s a barrier that’s preventing him from letting Tora see his deepest desires. Tora may

Comments

[hotlikerobots]

OMGGG!
kfhkufusfviushf~!!!!
Stupid Saga! Why did you stop with your spit-swapping sessions just because you're worried about Shou?!?! You're doing it with Tora, your unrequited love for christ's sake~~~!!!!!!!!!

....LOL
But omg, I love love love thisss!!! Shit, a really nice ending! I'd love to see a smut part though because for a while there I was wondering who'll be the uke; Certainly Tora wont agree to it but if he does, that'll be really interesting. Kyaaa!!!! :3

[sentimentalenvy]

Lolol cause he's a considerate person o:!! We can't leave Shou alone and neglected ;-;!! Haha I am so happy to hear that lol. You've been reading this from start to finish you awesome reader you o:!

lmao smut?! My god I can hardly remember the last time I've ever written a damn sex scene lmao (I think it has almost been a year...or half...bah. I don't remember anymore! That's a bad sign ._. ...) Nowadays I don't think I can write a make out scene without blushing or feeling weird lmao. Wonder where that shameless perverted girl went XD; Awh crap I've turned into a closet perv D: *flails* But I agree, it would be interesting and entertaining to see who will duke it out to the top *snickers* A scene like that could be fun for the next multi chapter project o:

[hotlikerobots]

B-b-but it's Tora! *cringes* LOL Well it's because being a TxS writer myself I cant quite imagine them in a fluffy condition because I always write them with a really angsty plot, y'know? That kinda frustrates me and seeing that there aren't much fluffy ToraxSaga fics around either makes it harder that's why I really love how you wrote this. Very light and enjoyable. ♥ ♥ ♥

Lawl you better call the shameless perverted girl out! Hahhaa! It'll come to you, dont worry. A smut isn't necessary as long as you'd keep writing for us that'll be fine. ^^; Anyways, please continue? You couldn't possibly end it like that!!!! xDDDD

[sentimentalenvy]

Lool I knoow I know XD! Ohh I see I see...hm...I unno I fail at attempting angst Lol but I don't wanna kill the pairing by writing something too corny and cheesy (I have a bad habit of turning fluff into a puddle of mushy love goo D: <- without really realizing it). Maybe I will try it one day (when someone goes and breaks my heart :x Experiences always comes in handy). Lol you write the pairing as an angsty couple but you crave for fluffy Tora/Saga XD?!

Lmao she comes out in the most random times it's spontaneous & scary 8O. Well it's not like I've never written them before o: but it's alright cause I'm sure I'll feel insanely horny one day and I'll be shootin' porn updates right and left lawl

Yeah I'll continue for sure. Which makes me wonder if this series will ever end. Everyone sounds like they're secretly gonna strangle me if I don't D8 (jkay). After the multichaptered fic it would prolly stop there though. Cause...Undeniable Deceit needs some love too o: !

[tennyo_fanfics]

Ohhh I loved this!!!

It was so sweet! Especially the end!!!! I hope you do write more!

[sentimentalenvy]

Ahah apparently my fluff needs some help (I tend to overfluff things -_-;)
I hope I can actually go through with another multi-chaptered fic! It's annoying me of how these ideas just rush into me and I start em without finishing (but I'll try to prevent that!) Thank you o: !

[unna_rainchaser]

I HAVE BEEN FOLLOWING!!
And I usually don't read Saga and Shou paired up with someone else but themselves (cause it's true, imho), but damn, this is just to well written to deny reading it.

I really would appreciate a sequel :D!

[sentimentalenvy]

Thank you for following o:!!

Oh really o__o?! Wow. Thanks for taking the time to check it out O_O! *Even if it says that Shou/Saga is one sided T_T sorry about that, but it won't be one sided for long in the next multi chapter project DX I'll be sure of that lawl. Besides, Tora needs some serious competition XD*

You'll get one >8O !

*determined look on face*

[chiyoo]

You sooo can't end it there! O.O Nonono!!

[sentimentalenvy]

Don't worry I'm noottt \O__O/ /O_O\ \O__O/ !!

[kuraiamore]

ME LIKKKEEYYYYY!!!!!!!
Sorry, can't htink of a better comment >.<
Really did enjoy reading about Tora's and Saga's journey from friends to . :D

[sentimentalenvy]

YEY >8O!!

Lol it's alright. I prefer these kinds of comments rather than a mere "O_O" or "DX". I like reading people's thoughts an opinions so much better o; So don't worry about it dear o:!

ahaha I'm glad to hear that

Thanks 8D