Title: Take a Chance
Chapter(s): pt 4/4
Author:
sentimentalenvyGenre: AU/Romance/Comedy/little angst?
Rating: PG-13 *omguh what o: ?*
Warnings: language
Pairing/Characters: Tora/Saga, Shou/Saga (one sided)
Synopsis: Saga is afraid to tell him how he truly feels because there’s a barrier that’s preventing him from letting Tora see his deepest desires. Tora may
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kfhkufusfviushf~!!!!
Stupid Saga! Why did you stop with your spit-swapping sessions just because you're worried about Shou?!?! You're doing it with Tora, your unrequited love for christ's sake~~~!!!!!!!!!
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But omg, I love love love thisss!!! Shit, a really nice ending! I'd love to see a smut part though because for a while there I was wondering who'll be the uke; Certainly Tora wont agree to it but if he does, that'll be really interesting. Kyaaa!!!! :3
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lmao smut?! My god I can hardly remember the last time I've ever written a damn sex scene lmao (I think it has almost been a year...or half...bah. I don't remember anymore! That's a bad sign ._. ...) Nowadays I don't think I can write a make out scene without blushing or feeling weird lmao. Wonder where that shameless perverted girl went XD; Awh crap I've turned into a closet perv D: *flails* But I agree, it would be interesting and entertaining to see who will duke it out to the top *snickers* A scene like that could be fun for the next multi chapter project o:
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Lawl you better call the shameless perverted girl out! Hahhaa! It'll come to you, dont worry. A smut isn't necessary as long as you'd keep writing for us that'll be fine. ^^; Anyways, please continue? You couldn't possibly end it like that!!!! xDDDD
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Lmao she comes out in the most random times it's spontaneous & scary 8O. Well it's not like I've never written them before o: but it's alright cause I'm sure I'll feel insanely horny one day and I'll be shootin' porn updates right and left lawl
Yeah I'll continue for sure. Which makes me wonder if this series will ever end. Everyone sounds like they're secretly gonna strangle me if I don't D8 (jkay). After the multichaptered fic it would prolly stop there though. Cause...Undeniable Deceit needs some love too o: !
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It was so sweet! Especially the end!!!! I hope you do write more!
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I hope I can actually go through with another multi-chaptered fic! It's annoying me of how these ideas just rush into me and I start em without finishing (but I'll try to prevent that!) Thank you o: !
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And I usually don't read Saga and Shou paired up with someone else but themselves (cause it's true, imho), but damn, this is just to well written to deny reading it.
I really would appreciate a sequel :D!
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Oh really o__o?! Wow. Thanks for taking the time to check it out O_O! *Even if it says that Shou/Saga is one sided T_T sorry about that, but it won't be one sided for long in the next multi chapter project DX I'll be sure of that lawl. Besides, Tora needs some serious competition XD*
You'll get one >8O !
*determined look on face*
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Sorry, can't htink of a better comment >.<
Really did enjoy reading about Tora's and Saga's journey from friends to . :D
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Lol it's alright. I prefer these kinds of comments rather than a mere "O_O" or "DX". I like reading people's thoughts an opinions so much better o; So don't worry about it dear o:!
ahaha I'm glad to hear that
Thanks 8D
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