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sengen35

Permission Granted

Feb 19, 2015 19:12

Title: Permission Granted
Rating: NC-17
Length: 3k
Pairing: Jongin/Kyungsoo
Summary: When worse comes to worst, Mr. Do must decide.
a/n: sequel to this.
( “Your dad has already called Jongin.” )

kaisoo, nc-17, pairing: jongin/kyungsoo

Comments 18

charliebnim February 19 2015, 11:52:05 UTC

the last sentence oh my god

sengen35 February 19 2015, 12:02:08 UTC

i'm so sorry omg
forgive me
o<-

charliebnim February 19 2015, 22:45:51 UTC

<3<3<<3<3<333333 NOOO I LOVE YOU

rjaejoo February 19 2015, 15:19:39 UTC

Yes! Sequel! Happy to see this. That last line cracks me up.

sengen35 February 19 2015, 15:56:25 UTC

i'm glad it did!

jonginspuppy February 19 2015, 15:40:04 UTC

i'm sorry i was laughing at the way you end it ;u;

sengen35 February 19 2015, 15:56:43 UTC

i can't help it i'm such a sucker ; A ;

jonginspuppy February 19 2015, 22:01:06 UTC

nooo the whole fic is so great!!! it just the last sentence is funny lol >_<

sengen35 February 21 2015, 10:22:27 UTC

sobs
well
yeah
that was funny--

read0write February 20 2015, 07:39:00 UTC

omg that last sentence XD
but hahahahah mr. do had to finally give in :P but good job mrs. do because she knows what is best
heeheehee very nice :D

sengen35 February 21 2015, 10:22:51 UTC

i mean, how awkward would it be to hear your son moaning and begging himself to be .. haha......

tripleeedots February 21 2015, 09:58:40 UTC

MR DO APPROVES!!! I guess he's kinda forced to but its still approval!! Yay Mrs Do!!

Jongin was so cute at the beginning, being all shy about touching kyungsoo previously and being so shocked that mr do called him. But suddenly he goes all alpha mode?? SO HOT

Omg the ending is the best HAHAHA

sengen35 February 21 2015, 10:23:20 UTC

YAY FOR MRS. DO TBH
sobs and i wish i had written this more hotter but i suck so i am sorry omg

tripleeedots February 21 2015, 14:27:02 UTC

no omg don't be sorry!! It was really good hehehe ^^