drabble requests #1

Feb 08, 2015 18:34


Title: Desire
Rating: PG-13
Length: 835w
Pairing: Jongin/Kyungsoo
Prompt: Shakespeare's Sonnet20
a/n: for incrediblyhappy
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drabble, g, pairing: jongin/kyungsoo, pg-13

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baekmebacon February 8 2015, 11:50:23 UTC
/screams to the high heavens/

UWAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHH THANK YOU. THANK YOU SO MUCH! THIS IS SO CUTE GAHHH
they're just so cute and fluffy!!!! and luhan!!!!! luhan is such a nice hyung hahahaha

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sengen35 February 18 2015, 12:31:34 UTC
i'm so glad you liked it ;;;
♡♡♡♡♡

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incrediblyhappy February 8 2015, 13:18:24 UTC
Freakin spot bae
FREAKIN SPOT
LUV U

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incrediblyhappy February 11 2015, 13:22:25 UTC
HELLO!

I was afraid it'd turn out really angst-y because the sonnet, from my understanding, is really really sad and I don't usually like to torture my mothership like this ;;;;;

BUT!! HUHU you made Jongin a painter /shoves u/

I love how you put so much detail into Jongin's hyperawareness of Kyungsoo's untouchable awesomeness, and that you left really subtle hints of Kyungsoo's attraction as well. ;A;

"Thank you." he mutters and from the corner of his eyes, he sees the pink darkening to a light shade of red. Jongin knows because he always looks at him and he tries not to feel boastful because he knows it's because of him.

Idk I like the whole, "hello there stranger" feel of the fic

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sengen35 February 18 2015, 12:32:25 UTC
SOOOOOBS
HUGS YOU
GLOMPS YOU
i'm glad i didn't disappoint you bc i honestly had no idea how i wrote this omg ;;
just know i'll gladly write for you whenever you want ♡♡♡

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kagoume February 8 2015, 15:20:17 UTC
THIS IS SO CUTE- OK
/exhale/
the first one is bitter sweet but fluffy too ;A; street painter Jongin eh ? and his beautiful muse Kyungsoo LEMME SOBS
also the second one GYAAAHHH SO FUNNY AND NATURAL ?!! idk like its just so natural i can really picture it to happen so light i love football (they play football right?) ITS JUST SO CUTE CHAAARM LEMME GIVE YOU MORE GAY GIFS BAHAHAHAHA

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sengen35 February 18 2015, 12:33:09 UTC
I LOVE THE SECOND ONE SO MUCH MAYLA ISTG i'm thinking of writing more but i have a long list i'm such an idiot--

AND YES
TOTALLY YES FOR MORE GAY GIFS--

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read0write February 9 2015, 04:47:01 UTC
lol cute :)

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sengen35 February 18 2015, 12:33:17 UTC
thank you ♡

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spaghettikimchi February 10 2015, 03:07:14 UTC
this is so adorable ;u; i love the first but the second one is cute too
omg im drowning into fluffiness kaisoo feels
love u authornim!

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sengen35 February 18 2015, 12:33:34 UTC
i'm glad you are
/drowns with you
thank you so much ♡

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