romaniranch fic dump 2 [how to fall in love part 2/2]

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[illusiontooreal]

Did you make that quote up yourself because i am CRYING. The article. Just. Urghsismsbahsuskdbs

[sendandreceive]

the quote from the article? yeah, but i dont think its an original concept. cant say for sure where i got the idea, but anyways! thanks for the comment <3

[gabbilikescandy]

i loved the impulsive progress in their relationship and also the quotes! it was so fluffy but still realistic with jongin not being chanyeol's first love but hopefully the last. And also chanyeol being a former alcoholic was unexpected at first but then i thought about his unrequited love and it all made sence... thank you so much for this chankai story <3

[beetricks]

I loved this story. It was so compassionate and tender. Chanyeol and Jongin are very well drawn-they seemed like real people and not escapees from a drama. I really like how you created a sense of intimacy right from the start, but kept the sexual tension to just the right point in time and to the degree it belonged. The dialogue conveys so much, yet nothing is overdone and no words are wasted. And while it may seem somewhat spare in terms of description, that's only because you had the restraint to be subtle. As always, a great piece. I'll be back to read this again.