Fan Fiction: B&S - Three Kevin/Chad Drabbles

[semisweetsoul]

Author: semisweetsoul
Fandom: Brothers & Sisters
Character: Kevin Walker
Table: In the Dark
Word Count: 200
Disclaimer: I don't own the show, the characters or the Walker house, and that’s too bad!
Notes: Written for my claim at drabble123.

1. Title: Secrecy
Prompt: # 18 before sunrise
Rating: R

Comments

[mary684]

I like all three. The second one is my favorite of all of them because there is a wonderful combination of joy, anger, meloncholy and avarice all wrapped up into it. I think all these speak to the nature of their relationship. Also, something about the clandestine viewing of his lover makes it very hot. I love this line Kevin feels some pride invading him because I read it two ways: one that he can/does physically invade his body and second that he is invading his privacy/space/vulnerability. Works very well and is...*coughs*...very hot.

I like the first with all the alliteration. Good manners, indeed! -- see, the things they teach you in kindergarten last a lifetime! Loved Kevin’s the poster boy for shilly-shallying Very nice characterization in one short sentence.

And the third is hard, isn't it? To be so in love and have to hide it. Alone and in love -- not easy.

Very nice with these. Is Kevin a favorite character of yours? You have a good spin on him and seem to write him with a great deal of truth. Again, don't know the fandom but it rings true to me.

Mind if I friend you here as well?