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itachibana13 in semecomplex

[fic] Sweet Dreams

Jan 04, 2010 23:04

Sweet Dreams
itachibana13
PG-13. drama, humor, sarcasm.
jongkey, slight onkey
9721 words

( mirror mirror on the wall, who's the craziest one of all )

rating: pg-13, fandom: shinee, pairing: onew/key, pairing: jonghyun/key, length: oneshot

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Re: part two. itachibana13 January 7 2010, 04:55:01 UTC

LMFAO WHY ARE YOU SO WEIRD AND AWKWARD AND AMAZINGLY AWESOME AT THE SAME TIME? ♥♥

KEY IS FIERCE ( ... )

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coke_pie221 January 5 2010, 04:55:07 UTC

FCK YES. JONGKEY 8DDD
so. i'm spotting too. cuz. yeah :'D

coke_pie221 January 5 2010, 05:39:19 UTC

WHOO~ I'VE ALWAYS LIKED ME A CRAZY KEY :'D
and JJONG TOO xD

god i love your jjong. srsly. his character. ♥ 8DD
key's ability is interesting. never read about something like this before :'D
and props to super long story xD

but yeah.
this be the end to mah comment.
and you know what follows ;D
♥♥♥

itachibana13 January 12 2010, 23:07:05 UTC

SOB, I FORGOT TO REPLY TO YOU. ;_______; I'M SORRY.

8D snarky jjong, y/y?
I almost felt reluctant to use key's ability, 'cause it reminded me too much of twilight. apparently no else thinks so. BUT. Edward and Bella's daughter. :/ she could like, show people her thoughts. so i was all, "ehhh" about it at first.

XDD thank you~♥

coke_pie221 January 13 2010, 01:50:28 UTC

LOL. I KNOW. I AM SO HURT ;A;

snarky jjong<3 very refreshing as opposed to his usual, stupid, fail, self :'D
and LOL. it is all good. cuz i haven't actually read twilight, and i've only seen the first movie. so i knew nothing about that :'DD
plus. twilight sorta kills vamps for me ;A; so i try to avoid having to watch it. or read it. or have anything to do with it.

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itachibana13 January 6 2010, 22:34:33 UTC

♥♥♥ thank you so much! :DDD lmfao, i don't even remember how i came up with it, it was just a 'lightbulb-over-head!' moment.

pwoth January 5 2010, 05:04:23 UTC

Okay this is long, but it leaves me wanting more. The whole fic in general was so well put, all the scenes in it precisely put in at all the right times, and both Key And Jjong's snarky comments kept the fic flowing. Like all great writing does to me, it makes me wonder if authors of such great works of writing plan every single detail out, and what happens when.

I love so much.♥~

itachibana13 January 6 2010, 22:35:41 UTC

♥ thank you so much! ^^ and lol, i guess it depends on the person/story?