[fic] The Apples Don't Belong in the Apple Juice

Sep 24, 2010 23:32

The Apples Don't Belong in the Apple Juice
itachibana13
PG; comedy, romance.
jonghyun/onew; 3434 words.

Jonghyun loves writing. )

rating: pg, pairing: jonghyun/onew, length: oneshot

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aaliyah_babygul September 25 2010, 04:14:54 UTC
PERFECT!!!!!!!!!!!!! OMG I CAN'T BELIEVE THAT JONGYU MADE ME FEEL SO HAPPY <3333

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itachibana13 September 25 2010, 19:29:34 UTC
D:! you say that like jongyu usually doesn't make you happy ): ): ):

but thank you so much! :D

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aaliyah_babygul September 25 2010, 19:33:55 UTC
I said that because Jongkey is my real OTP but there's something magical about Jongyu <333 I want some more. ^__~

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itachibana13 September 25 2010, 19:46:38 UTC
come to the jongyu side! /does magical jongyu convert dance

read the original, it's amazing!

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hiswhitelies September 25 2010, 04:44:51 UTC
THIS. THIS IS SO CUTE, HILARIOUS, AWESOME, BEAUTIFUL AND SWEET ALL IN ONE. FML. have to put this to my memories. this is just... GOD, I WANT TO READ MORE. i think i'm going crazy.

... )

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itachibana13 September 25 2010, 19:38:28 UTC
sobs thank you so much! and if you want more, read closeta's orginal fic! ten times better than mine :D


... )

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hiswhitelies September 26 2010, 01:36:54 UTC
i've read her fic some time ago. i think that was during our vacation break. but anyways, i love both of your fic. <3 it's like yours is a continuation of hers. the ending made me happy. like finally... they kissed! <3

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itachibana13 September 25 2010, 19:40:08 UTC
thank you so much ;___;!

pokemon will forever be the most important thing!

isn't the original great! i read it and was like a;fkjd;kf SO CUTE and yeah 8D and sobs you're welcome!

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shinin9irl September 25 2010, 06:29:56 UTC
D'awwwww!!! this is cute. and sweet. and lovely. :D
I love how it's jonghyun that's helplessly in love with Jinki and trying to get his attention~ cause most jongyu I've read, it's always the other way around ^^

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itachibana13 September 25 2010, 19:43:03 UTC
thank you! :D
and really? i think i've read a fair share of both. O:

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volatileflame September 25 2010, 16:24:35 UTC
simply lovely <3

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itachibana13 September 25 2010, 19:43:17 UTC
thank you! :D

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