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AU Chapter 2: First Impressions

Nov 15, 2007 05:19

Title: First Impressions
Pairing: Renji X Byakuya
Warning: ...Kids, don't smoke; you're burning money...
Rating: PG-13 (NC-17 overall)
Summary: Renji doesn't exactly impress Byakuya on the first day of filming.
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sinian November 15 2007, 14:41:46 UTC

Yay! His gaze continued shifting down, to the jeans that clung loosely to his hips and legs. He watched the hips sway as Renji’s body moved, looked at that curve of h-

"CUT! That was GREAT!"

Definitely my favourite scene in this part. There's quite some tension building up! *g*

And I'm really looking forward for Yachiru to appear. ^_^ A pink hurricane devastating the set...

day_eight November 15 2007, 21:17:35 UTC

Ohhh... Yachiru... Renji and Bya are REALLY looking forward to her. *cough*

Hope you keep reading!

sinian November 15 2007, 21:28:22 UTC

I bet they do. *eg*

Btw, are you planning on other charas showing up along the way?
(no, I'm not curious, not at all ^.~)

day_eight November 16 2007, 00:50:40 UTC

Um. We hadn't really talked/thought about it yet. But... we're not against anything, so... you never know. I'm sure any other characters wouldn't have a big part, since we're sticking to Bya and Ren's point of views, but that's a good question, lol!

Will have to talk to LCP and see what she thinks.

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Wooooo! evildrem November 15 2007, 15:46:21 UTC

I'm really enjoying this AU. Both Bya, Renji and Kenpachi are very IC and I am looking forward to seeing where you take me with the story.

Re: Wooooo! day_eight November 15 2007, 21:15:52 UTC

Aw... Thanks so much! We're glad that we're in character!

The story is definitely gonna be one hell of a ride. *wink*

bale_ikura November 15 2007, 21:50:02 UTC

Renji is starting to sound like an alcoholic XD He'd BETTER start hitting the gym six days a week instead of four or else all that beer is going to catch up to him X3 I'm sure Byakuya would appreciate the view too

day_eight November 16 2007, 00:54:00 UTC

An alcoholic and a chain smoker?

*sigh*

I don't think Renji could get fat if he tried... he was born to be sexy. XD

lcpdragonslayer November 16 2007, 17:31:37 UTC

Byakuya agrees. xP

aniay November 18 2007, 22:49:04 UTC

Mmmmm awesome story. I'm waiting for cotinuation and I second sirian that Urahara would be just perfect as some crazy agent.

day_eight November 18 2007, 23:27:06 UTC

Thank you!

...and... will certainly consider the Urahara idea. He's a hard character to write... would definitely be a good challenge.