This. Was. So. Beautiful. I read every word scared that sehun would die at the end seriously it was so sad...but the way you wrote how luhan understood sehun's thoughts about religion and stuff and eventually adopted those thoughts for himself, i could relate to him a lot tbh. Everything was beatiful and sweet and i'm glad it didnt end that badly or else i'd cry forever ;(((( THANK YOU FOR SHARING and thank you for not killing sehun^^ congrats author-nim ♥
*sobs* Thank you so much for that sweet comment. I'm glad you enjoyed it. <3
I was very unsure about the whole religion topic because I didn't want to write it in an offensive way but I also wanted to get my point across. I hope that worked out.
And no, I couldn't let Sehun die ... I feel like that solution would have been too easy as an ending. (And don't worry I would have had to put a characterdeath warning, too.)
Re: HOW PERFECT!hoe_sehoonSeptember 8 2016, 23:52:02 UTC
Ugh gotta find me a Luhan >.< Honestly after reading your story I'm pining over him so much! Although you're right, it's not difficult to find a "Luhan" but dammit I gotta marry him ;;;;
Pssh grand master *talk to the hand* Take a mirror and look at yourself, grand master :P
I understand if you didn't write a sequel, especially when this part of the story is taken from your personal life. I am contented with this ending and I will always imagine hunhan in my head as the perfect couple from this story <333 Haha good advisor... You mean the dorky kkt emojis I sent you every time XD Jk, I'm glad I could help you in some way and you could write this amazing fic! <333
I usually don't read story and listen to soundtrack if there's any, I know I'm a bad peraon because the author knows his story better then the reader but I'm hopeless. Anyway this time I gave a chance to the soundtrack and it was really worth it because it gave this story something more. I thougt that I would have to read about Sehun dying and I wouldn't have bore it, just not, because usually I feel so miserable and keep thinking how it's not right, but you just found another way to make me feel more miserable and relived at the same time. Because it's "easier" ending the life of a character then keep it going on with all its problems. That's why I liked it with all my heart. The last part was the best one. When they discussed about leaving each other, reading Luhan answer gave me hope for them and their future. I thought that the biggest treat to their relationship were Luhan's parents bit actually weren't. It's life itself and the decision that we make about it. Religion isn't usually an easy topic and I thought you would have
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Thanks for giving the soundtrack a chance. ^^ It is not necessary but I always find it nice when authors give the readers songs that inspired them because it helps to understand the mood of certain scenes better, so I'm always doing that, too.
I couldn't have let Sehun die here. He had suffered so much and he deserved happiness and everything ... and you are right it would have been too easy to let him die.
I was very unsure about the relgion topic because I didn't want to offend anyone but I also wanted to get my point across. Thus, I had to be very careful while writing. It's very easy to get offensive here, I guess.
This is incredibly beautiful... You made a really really good story with such a difficult topic you know. I think a topic about religion isn't that easy to bring upon a story, but hell you beat it gurl! Fuck im cryingggg, help me help me god ugh please tell me sehun will be okay and luhan will be okay, and they'll live their happily ever after.....
You know I love youuuuuuu<3 thank you for joining selubration and writing such a beautiful story~~~
Tbh, I was very unsure about the topic. "Can I write it like this?", "Is this okay?" I didn't want offend anyone but I wanted to get my message across, too which was sometimes a little difficult. But I am glad to see that it seems to have worked out.
Well, I hope Luhan and Sehun will be okay, too. Because I myself don't know either and I wouldn't dare to talk about it. I know someone close to me who has that sickness and that's why I can only write to the point until I wrote it in the story. I don't know what the future will bring ...
Asdfghjkl, thank you ;; for reading and liking it. <3
okay, in all honesty, this has got to be my most favorite out of all the selubration fics so far. THIS. IS. SO. BEAUTIFUL. I. CANNOT. EVEN. i haven't read such a good fic in a long time and i am so grateful to have come across this fic. i love how you portrayed that there's no need for things such as religion when it comes to love. not all writers can do that without offending believers and non-believers. I. SIMPLY. LOVE. YOUR. WORK. LMAO IM BLABBERING STUFF BUT SERIOUSLY THIS IS REALLY GOOD :-)))
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I was very unsure about the whole religion topic because I didn't want to write it in an offensive way but I also wanted to get my point across. I hope that worked out.
And no, I couldn't let Sehun die ... I feel like that solution would have been too easy as an ending. (And don't worry I would have had to put a characterdeath warning, too.)
~ Freeza :D
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Pssh grand master *talk to the hand* Take a mirror and look at yourself, grand master :P
I understand if you didn't write a sequel, especially when this part of the story is taken from your personal life. I am contented with this ending and I will always imagine hunhan in my head as the perfect couple from this story <333
Haha good advisor... You mean the dorky kkt emojis I sent you every time XD Jk, I'm glad I could help you in some way and you could write this amazing fic! <333
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I usually don't read story and listen to soundtrack if there's any, I know I'm a bad peraon because the author knows his story better then the reader but I'm hopeless. Anyway this time I gave a chance to the soundtrack and it was really worth it because it gave this story something more. I thougt that I would have to read about Sehun dying and I wouldn't have bore it, just not, because usually I feel so miserable and keep thinking how it's not right, but you just found another way to make me feel more miserable and relived at the same time. Because it's "easier" ending the life of a character then keep it going on with all its problems. That's why I liked it with all my heart. The last part was the best one. When they discussed about leaving each other, reading Luhan answer gave me hope for them and their future. I thought that the biggest treat to their relationship were Luhan's parents bit actually weren't. It's life itself and the decision that we make about it.
Religion isn't usually an easy topic and I thought you would have ( ... )
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It is not necessary but I always find it nice when authors give the readers songs that inspired them because it helps to understand the mood of certain scenes better, so I'm always doing that, too.
I couldn't have let Sehun die here. He had suffered so much and he deserved happiness and everything ... and you are right it would have been too easy to let him die.
I was very unsure about the relgion topic because I didn't want to offend anyone but I also wanted to get my point across.
Thus, I had to be very careful while writing. It's very easy to get offensive here, I guess.
Thank you for reading, I'm glad you liked it. <3
~ Freeza :D
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You know I love youuuuuuu<3 thank you for joining selubration and writing such a beautiful story~~~
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I didn't want offend anyone but I wanted to get my message across, too which was sometimes a little difficult.
But I am glad to see that it seems to have worked out.
Well, I hope Luhan and Sehun will be okay, too.
Because I myself don't know either and I wouldn't dare to talk about it. I know someone close to me who has that sickness and that's why I can only write to the point until I wrote it in the story. I don't know what the future will bring ...
Asdfghjkl, thank you ;; for reading and liking it. <3
~ Freeza :D
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okay, in all honesty, this has got to be my most favorite out of all the selubration fics so far.
THIS. IS. SO. BEAUTIFUL. I. CANNOT. EVEN.
i haven't read such a good fic in a long time and i am so grateful to have come across this fic. i love how you portrayed that there's no need for things such as religion when it comes to love. not all writers can do that without offending believers and non-believers. I. SIMPLY. LOVE. YOUR. WORK. LMAO IM BLABBERING STUFF BUT SERIOUSLY THIS IS REALLY GOOD :-)))
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*thinks of all the good sb fics I read so far* Really???!!! *blushes*
I don't know what to say. //////O//////
I was very unsure about the religion topic. I'm glad it worked out. ;;
And oh my goodness thank you so much. <3<3<3
~ Freeza :D
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