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[fic] - in the sky

Feb 03, 2011 20:32

Title: in the sky
Type: Fanfiction
Style: One hour on LJ
Fandom: Harry Potter
Rating: T
Characters: Severus Snape, Lily Evans
Pairing: Lily/Snape
Prompts from Sonya: writing in blood; listening to the radio on lazy Sundays; the rumors that make your spine tingle; "I thought we'd be a fairy tale, you know?"; mosaic of regrets; "Not even amortentia could ( Read more... )

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justlovely_9 February 4 2011, 04:02:53 UTC

Oh my god. That was just beautiful and wistful, actually.
I really like it and the prompts were wonderful (Sonya), I really like how you incorporated them in!

seleneswan February 4 2011, 04:08:39 UTC

I'm glad you liked ittt. (:

justlovely_9 February 4 2011, 04:11:31 UTC

There's just this sort of hopeful vibe you get but then with going down the memories, it's like all your dreams are crushed and it's sort of painful. It's depressing but it's so wonderfully written that you feel the full impact.

seleneswan February 4 2011, 04:27:36 UTC

that's good! I was aiming for that. it was more chronological than anything, but because the chronology is sad itself, it transferred nicely. so you'll have to thank j.k. rowling for that, haha.

I'm flattered you think so! I'm still really unsure of it, myself. and it's so short, on top of it all. but I'm glad you liked it! makes me more...reassured?

justlovely_9 February 6 2011, 04:59:15 UTC

Yeah, it really did. And as you went down, it was so pretty in a sort of angsty pretty way?

Don't be, quantity is never better than quality so have some faith; I'm sure with more practice, it'll be longer!

seleneswan February 6 2011, 05:04:27 UTC

Okay, okay. Good. That was aiming for!

I suppose. It's just strange...normally I write more in one hour, but the prompts made me think a lot between the sections, and as to how to put all of them in there. But, on the plus side, I did finish it in exactly one hour. Like, on the minute, I finished.

justlovely_9 February 6 2011, 05:15:57 UTC

Goal achieved!

Well prompts are made to make you think of how to incorporate them and make it flow well into the story, like with some prompts, there's a similar theme running through them so you could base the story on that theme.
Haha, I could have never done that; I over-think too much and tend to re-read things to get a flow which usually takes too much time to be able to finish one in one hour.

seleneswan February 6 2011, 21:47:52 UTC

Haha, it's not hard. You could do it, I promise. (:

justlovely_9 February 9 2011, 03:02:22 UTC

If I ever find the time...but thank you very much for your support!! :D

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