Fanfiction: Claim (Heroes)

[selenak]

Title: Claim

Disclaimer: All owned by NBC.

Spoilers: Until the The Hard Part

Summary: Peter wants to talk about Claire. Nathan tries not to.

Rating: PG-13. .

Thanks to: resolute for beta-reading.

Timeline: Set between .07% and The Hard Part

Comments

[emmademarais]

This is going to sound like an odd comment (and mein Gott could this font be any smaller?), but I both see this fic being totally something I would write and not at all.

Not sure how to explain, but I liked it. Kind of like reading one of my own fic for the first time without having to actually write it. A unique experience... Thank you...

[selenak]

Fonts always can in lj country, I think. *g*

Danke sehr for the feedback!

[selenak]

I do adore them in their dysfunctional glory. And yes, this is so why they all three need to survive - they need to come to terms with each other, Claire and Nathan especially.

...I'm not sure, because in the ubercreepy scene where Sylar-as-Nathan kills her, that's not what you pay attention to, but: at the start of the scene, in Nathan's study, Claire is looking at three photos. One is Peter, Nathan and Angela, one is Peter and Nathan, and I think the third one might be Peter, Claire and Nathan, with Claire in the middle, but we see them so briefly that I'm just not sure. And speaking of that future of doom, her fiance says she watches "Nathan" every time he's on tv, which considering what happened and who he really is so sad...

[shimmeree]

That was really kind of sad and sweet. I liked it.

[selenak]

That mixture was what I was going for. Thank you!

[meli_64]

Great!

[selenak]

Thank you!

[selenak]

To slightly misquote Mr. Bennet, "they do break my heart", these Petrellis, they really do.