Mousefix

Dec 20, 2011 01:43

Pairing: S/K
Rating: PG

I'm trying to write more short, fast, crappy stories.

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AWWWWW negniahn December 20 2011, 08:01:44 UTC
wwwwwww

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Re: AWWWWW negniahn December 20 2011, 08:03:01 UTC
I didn't notice any change in tone! Except, I don't know, it kept getting sweeter.

Seriously this is so sugary sweet it shouldn't be allowed to exist, but here we are, thank god.

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Re: AWWWWW sekrit_omg December 20 2011, 08:26:01 UTC
It went from like funny to sweet or ... god I'm tired.

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negniahn December 20 2011, 08:27:40 UTC
yaeh

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hollycomb December 21 2011, 00:16:04 UTC
This was my favorite part:

He’s really great, he’s eating some pineapple

;__;

like, ahhhh. my ideal Stan voice, there it is. I love reading about Stan and his love of filthy animals, and I like that he points out that Kyle is a filthy animal he loves, aw, haha.

I saw an extremely small mouse peek out of a tiny hole in the concrete at the Midtown MARTA station once, he was so like, DELICATE, he looked like a mystical creature or something.

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sekrit_omg December 21 2011, 19:56:57 UTC
Kyle secretly revels in being a filthy animal.

I love super cute animals, actually. But I really hate ugly ones. A little mouse at a train station I'd be totally down with. Last night some gross rat ran across the street and we were all like, yuck. Chicago has a horrible bunny infestation problem, though, which totally pleases me. I should write a story about Stan rescuing these rabbits and Kyle being like, "Don't you know what happens with rabbits?" and they wake up one morning and it's fucking Trouble with Tribbles.

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formerdinosaur December 22 2011, 00:04:27 UTC
Oh yeah, I am legit terrified of rats. The other side of this charming MARTA story is that I once saw a rat dying on the sidewalk at Arts Center station. Like, this huge, filthy rat lying there fighting for its last breaths in the goddamn light of day, and this was relatively soon after we'd moved to Atlanta, so mostly I thought 'wow, now I'm really living in the city.'

But anyway, why it's suddenly important to tell you this is that I'm procrastinating on Waxing Craig, which is almost done, maybe. I do love the idea of Stan and Kyle's apartment being overrun with bunnies, and Stan being like, 'fine, we'll sell some to the local pet stores,' and picking one up and Kyle having a hissy fit because he has some particular bond with ~THAT~ one.

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sekrit_omg December 22 2011, 17:27:01 UTC
MARTA is, in my very limited experience, an incredibly inconvenient hassle, rats aside. But, yeah, in New York rats just run up and down the tracks all the time, so if you don't like them, stand back from the platform or mind the gap or whatever.

Once in Chicago my friend and I were sitting outside my house talking and a fucking fox ran by and it was the best/worst moment of our lives.

Rabbit story, sure, shuffle that to the middle of the deck.

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negniahn December 21 2011, 06:21:08 UTC
So GUESS WHAT this is so adorable. The way mice are, but with extra Kyle’s ass. You know? You do ( ... )

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negniahn December 21 2011, 06:23:31 UTC
woah fuck LJ just did a THING while I was writing that comment!

now there are BLUE/TEAL GRADIENTS ON THE REPLY/COMMENT BUTTONS watch out 2011 we figured out fill effects B^)

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sekrit_omg December 21 2011, 07:13:14 UTC
I might have to change to journal-style view. This is unbearably shitty.

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sekrit_omg December 21 2011, 20:06:51 UTC
I know ( ... )

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mousie_girl January 2 2012, 03:15:59 UTC
Aww, I'm so glad I stumbled upon this fic. It's so cute. It's got two of my most favorite things in it: Style and mice. I've always wanted a mouse ever since I was little and this fic made me think of my childhood.

I loved how Stan's all 'i like him' and Kyle's like 'OMG GERMS!'. I enjoyed that when Kyle finally did get a look at the mouse he actually liked him too. It's was all very sweet. ^_^

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sekrit_omg January 2 2012, 03:39:34 UTC
Thanks for reading! I've really glad you liked this. I think mice are pretty cute, too, but if one came into my house (without my knowledge/approval), I'd be pretty weirded out. Like, I had a mouse a few years ago, and he ate my tinfoil. No one needs that.

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