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crawls out of hole with fic offering Hello...?

Oct 06, 2008 16:47

Title: Paradigm
Author: sekamum
Pairing: Light 585
Rating: PG
Disclaimer: I do not own these characters... unfortunately. Or maybe fortunately.
Summary: Hakkai dreams.
Notes: This... is an attempt to make Tenpou talk to me again. Hakkai seems more helpful right now... even if he's just angsting.

It was always the same: running, searching, finding, bleeding ( Read more... )

hakkai, saiyuki, fanfiction, gojyo, 58

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feait October 7 2008, 11:13:56 UTC

i like it. Hakkai has had his dreams haunted by his loss of Kanan for so long it's almost a relief to see a change, even if the change is more loss.

sekamum October 7 2008, 11:42:40 UTC

That's exactly what I was trying to get at. His subconscious is basically prodding him along, trying to get him to realize maybe x years of grief is enough, and to get him to admit to the emotions we fangirls know he has for Gojyo.

Ah, Hakkai, you're so repressed... because you just know he's going to rationalize and explain it away, but he'll be thinking about it then, at least.

And I'm rambling. I'm glad you liked it, though!

feait October 7 2008, 12:20:03 UTC

Hakkai is repressed by his own choice. He refuses to admit that he cares because if he does that means he opens himself to a whole world of hurt or worse: the ones he cares for will suffer because of him.

emiliana84 October 7 2008, 21:36:03 UTC

*___ ( ... )

sekamum October 8 2008, 00:04:27 UTC

*is stunned at such a reaction* Wow. I-- wow. I don't think I've EVER had that kind of response on something I've written. I don't mind AT ALL that you ranted. Um, feel free to look around? Unfortunately, I don't have much in the way of Saiyuki... I was having a bit of trouble with the only other thing, and this came instead. As I commented in the notes, Tenpou's not being talkative, and Hakkai insists on angsting at me ( ... )

sekamum October 8 2008, 00:05:15 UTC

sorry, that's fanfiction.net. oops.

emiliana84 October 9 2008, 22:51:36 UTC

Wow, you actually replied to my comment! I somewhat thought I'd freaked you out!!! ^__^
Seriously, I was really down after what happened in the latest chapter of Gaiden, your fic simply happened to set me off... I'm not usually THAT worked up over Saiyuki... or maybe I am, whatever...XD
I just thought, you know, how I always read pages and pages AND PAGES of fanfics about Saiyuki which leave me feeling more depressed than before (since long fics tend to end up AU anyway, and off-character).. Yours was, well. Like a sidenote you might read in the sidelines of the actual manga...
I just thought it captured Hakkai perfectly, and the way he feels (or might feel), the confusion at caring about someone again after *Kanan*.
<> Aw, my heart went, like, *squeeze* (to quote from Goku ( ... )

sekamum October 10 2008, 01:19:38 UTC

It's always, ALWAYS nice to get someone hooked on another fandom. Especially since it's apparently my writing that's getting you interested! *is extremely flattered ( ... )

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