[FIC] Half Past Four; Shifting Gear - Prologue

[seiyoku]

Title: Half Past Four; Shifting Gear
Author: seiyoku
Chapter: Prologue/?
Rating: Hard R
Genre: AU; action/psychological thriller
Warnings: Very graphic violence, drug references, adult themes, excessive swearing and possible character death.
Fandom: J-pop, dorama, J-rock crossover (oh god, here we go...)
Bands: Kat-tun, lynch., the Gazette,

Comments

[hereticpop]

ohmygoshohmygosh. you are crazy. and this fact makes me so happy because the crazy is so good. just the idea of this fic is enough for me to know that it's going to be amazing and the line-up of bands starring cracks me up and is awesome at the same time. and Hazuki/Aoi, lol. I once thought of this pairing but it was just another fic I've never got to write. btw, you make me feel so ashamed, with yet another epic multichapter when I can't even have a decent one-shot done. but this is completely irrelevant because ohmygosh, this.

now why does the idea of a brainwashed Kame seem so hilarious to me? perhaps there's just something about him that makes it believable. XD but personal quirks aside, this prologue was scary. just to think that you could wake up and couldn't move and someone would be messing with your brain... uh, scary. and I'm already making guesses even though this was just so short and doesn't tell much about the story - yeah, what are you thinking, posting just a short prologue? I'm so curious! - anyway, it made me think that they're brainwashing Kame into some sort of deadly motherfucker that will have a mission of doing something dangerous that could perhaps get him dead in the end. because he wouldn't be really deadly if they didn't brainwash him, right? :P not like badass Jin/Miroku, for whose appearance I can't wait. btw, those pictures you used of him, that outfit - fuck, SO HOT. I have a thing for man in feathers. :D

I really can't say much at this point except that it seems like it's going to be something kickass amazing so I'm waiting. but omg, thank you for your mind that comes up with things like this, it's really the greatest. ♥

[seiyoku]

First of all... LOL for the fact that your comment is almost as long as my prologue. Well, not quiet, but almost.

And yes, I am most certainly crazy! It can be problematic and I really do feel sorry for whatever muses get pulled into my latest insane idea. Thought you would like the band line up. Pretty impressive, isn't it? And the idea of Hazuki/Aoi is a pretty damn good one, if I may say so myself. I mean, seriously, take a moment to actually just think and picture that. *drools a bit* I do blame my other Hazuki and Aoi muses for this though, as they were the ones who put the idea into my head.

And ergh, don't remind me that this is yet another epic multichapter. I am trying to ignore that little truth.

Brainwashed Kame is just... well, it is a golden idea. I mean, if anyone was going to get brainwashed, it would be him, right? At first I was to used Shuji from Nobuta wo Produce but that just didn't work and as much as I looooove Ryu from Gokusen 2, the idea of him being brainwashed is just laughable. He would have kicked ass. So it had to be just plain old Kame, which, as you said, makes it hilarious!

Don't worry, the next chapter is a loooooot longer. Don't think any chapters will be as long as DC and HG though, but still a hell of a lot longer than this little teaser.

And oh, I like the way you think. Kame... deadly motherfucker on a mission... sounds pretty damn close to right to me ;)

Miroku/Jin is the main/only narrative, so you will get lots of him. Only a few little scenes from Kame's point of view. I am not going all out like I do with the other stories. Which is sad. No Hazuki POV. *cries* But it will be ok, cause he is kickass. And YES. Jin in DUES is like, the hottest thing ever. Feathers and braids. Like an Indian. lol.

As always, thank you for your thoughts, m'dear. *hands baskets of cookies*