Title: Addiction
Author:
seiyokuRating: R
Genre: angsty retrospective slutty ficlet
Warnings: Drug references, sexual references, swearing
Pairings: Akame
Disclaimers: Hell used to belong to Satan; and then Kat-tun took over.
Authors notes: Weee! They are rockstars! Let's give 'em booze and drugs cause it makes for great fanfic plot bunnies
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HA! Thick and creamy Kame, served with a side of strawberries (so hard not to write 'fries' there, but that would just be disturbing...) But yes, I was surprised at how good Kame turned out, especially with all the crazy thoughts of blurry lines. You are right; he is made for this sort of shit. And fuck yeah, there should have been more Jin. There always needs to be more Jin. At first I didn't have him in it at all, then that had to change as the story got longer. And then about half way through (the couch cigarette scene *hothothothot*) I was about to ditch Kame all together and just follow Jin around in a sort of 'fangirl gone wrong attempt at fic' way. *tosses the plot back there somewhere and just legs it after Jin*
I am glad that I got the blurry lines working. Oddly enough (and this is our little secret) most of that was a case of me not knowing what I was doing, not seeing a plot and yet just word vomiting onto the screen. I was just in the mood to write yet had no idea what I wanted and where it was going and how it was going to work. Then this all came out and I went around and filled in some gaps and blurred things a bit more and put in street lights and taxies and BAM, nice fuzzy, confusing fic.
I love your take on the end. I think that was what I was going for, without really thinking about the feeling of plunging into water. But that is it, isn't it?! Very good. And I must admit, it turned out better than what I was hoping for. It originally ended with the 'But Jin was like a drug' sentence repeat and then got changed fifty million times and turned out like that. I mean, seriously, who could quit Jin?
And serious things happen in kitchens, right? I don't believe you at all! Lies! I mean, maybe I am weird and all, but I tend to remember a strange little fic about Ruki eating a brain that Aoi brought home... and that all happened in a kitchen. Serious my ass ;)
Oh, you need icons! Douchebag Kame ones and hot as all hell Jin ones!!
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