[Akame] Addiction

Sep 07, 2010 00:34

Title: Addiction
Author: seiyoku
Rating: R
Genre: angsty retrospective slutty ficlet
Warnings: Drug references, sexual references, swearing
Pairings: Akame
Disclaimers: Hell used to belong to Satan; and then Kat-tun took over.
Authors notes: Weee! They are rockstars! Let's give 'em booze and drugs cause it makes for great fanfic plot bunnies ( Read more... )

pairing: kamenashi/akanishi, fandom: kat-tun, fic: oneshot

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Queen of the late replies... seiyoku September 28 2010, 23:27:39 UTC
Where the hell is my drunk!angsty!kame fic?! You relied to this ages ago now... that is plenty of time for it to be written and up. Want want want want want!

HA! Thick and creamy Kame, served with a side of strawberries (so hard not to write 'fries' there, but that would just be disturbing...) But yes, I was surprised at how good Kame turned out, especially with all the crazy thoughts of blurry lines. You are right; he is made for this sort of shit. And fuck yeah, there should have been more Jin. There always needs to be more Jin. At first I didn't have him in it at all, then that had to change as the story got longer. And then about half way through (the couch cigarette scene *hothothothot*) I was about to ditch Kame all together and just follow Jin around in a sort of 'fangirl gone wrong attempt at fic' way. *tosses the plot back there somewhere and just legs it after Jin*

I am glad that I got the blurry lines working. Oddly enough (and this is our little secret) most of that was a case of me not knowing what I was doing, not seeing a plot and yet just word vomiting onto the screen. I was just in the mood to write yet had no idea what I wanted and where it was going and how it was going to work. Then this all came out and I went around and filled in some gaps and blurred things a bit more and put in street lights and taxies and BAM, nice fuzzy, confusing fic.

I love your take on the end. I think that was what I was going for, without really thinking about the feeling of plunging into water. But that is it, isn't it?! Very good. And I must admit, it turned out better than what I was hoping for. It originally ended with the 'But Jin was like a drug' sentence repeat and then got changed fifty million times and turned out like that. I mean, seriously, who could quit Jin?

And serious things happen in kitchens, right? I don't believe you at all! Lies! I mean, maybe I am weird and all, but I tend to remember a strange little fic about Ruki eating a brain that Aoi brought home... and that all happened in a kitchen. Serious my ass ;)

Oh, you need icons! Douchebag Kame ones and hot as all hell Jin ones!!

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