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Title: Fix My Heart
Length: one-shot
Author: Li Youhan (Razra_Eizel)
Rating: PG-13
Genre: romance, fluff
Pairing: Yunjae
Summary: “Will you fix it? My heart.”
Disclaimer: I don’t own anything
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From http://jaeho-plot.livejournal.com/181391.html plot 2 :D this is the first time I’ve tried an all-dialogue fic. Usually I do all-narrative, but never all-dialogue so this is quite new for me. I wish to be able to capture the actions even through dialogue only, so please tell me whether I’ve succeeded or not.
By the way, I want to ask something to you guys, so make sure to read the note.
If I were to publish a fic anthology, would anyone be interested to buy? Of course, I’m not gonna overcharge. This is just an honest question (or I’m trying to be a writercumbusinessman :P). As an incentive, half of the stories in the anthology would be stories that aren’t published online, but exclusively for that anthology. Do you think it’ll work? I want honest opinions here :D
Fix My Heart
“Will you go out with me?”
“No.”
“Why not?”
“You’re not my type.”
“So what’s your type?”
“Why should I tell you?”
“Because I want to be someone you can like.”
“Just give up. Don’t bother trying.”
“I’m not that kind of person.”
“Even if I will never like you?”
“Feelings are fickle. We’ll see.”
“Go away.”
“Fine, I will go away for now.”
-.-.-.-.-.-.-.-.-.-.
“Is he your type?”
“What do you care?”
“I want to know if he’s your type.”
“What if he is? What’s it to you?”
“I just want to make sure you’re happy.”
“Oh, come on. No one in this time genuinely wishes for that. Don’t be a hypocrite.”
“I do. Really wish you happiness.”
“Then go away and don’t bother me again.”
“If you say so...”
-.-.-.-.-.-.-.-.-.-.
“...”
“What? Come to gloat?”
“No. I will never do that.”
“Stop being such a goody two shoes.”
“I’m not. I’m here because of you.”
“Liar.”
“Call me whatever you want. It won’t change the fact that I like you.”
“Why? I’ve never treated you kindly.”
“That’s because you were trying to deter me. I’ve seen you with your friends. You’re a kind person.”
“I’m not.”
“Now you’re the liar.”
“You’re too good to be true.”
“But I’m real and here I am. All yours for the taking.”
“Why? There are better people out there! People who will be more than glad to be with you. Unlike me.”
“So he wasn’t your type, after all?”
“The arsehole dumped me. Wait till I have my revenge on him.”
“That’s the spirit. Come on, let’s wash your face and return to class.”
“Yeah... thanks.”
“You’re welcome.”
“Don’t expect anything yet.”
“Wouldn’t dare to.”
-.-.-.-.-.-.-.-.-.-.
“How are you feeling now?”
“Surprisingly a lot better.”
“Why is there surprisingly?”
“Because I didn’t expect anything.”
“You wound me.”
“Shut up, you.”
“That’s alright, though. As long as you’re feeling better.”
“You’re such a sweet talker.”
“Well, has it touched you yet?”
“No. Try harder.”
“Is that a challenge?”
“Yes, it’s a challenge.”
-.-.-.-.-.-.-.-.-.-.
“Have I proven my worth?”
“Another surprisingly, you have.”
“Now will you got out with me?”
“That depends.”
“Depends on what?”
“Will you?”
“Will I what?”
“Fix it. My heart, I mean.”
“Of course. If I’m allowed to.”
“I grant you my permission. Now make it whole again.”
“I promise I will. I’ll make it better and whole again, and in time, it’ll be the best it can be.”
“I’ll be waiting for that then. Thank you.”
“No problem. I love you.”
End of Story
Okay, there you go. Hope you enjoyed that :D I’ve changed the dialogue from the prompt slightly, but not enough to make it unrecognizable, hopefully
It’s really up to you who says what, just know that the person who speaks first in all scenes is the same, so you if think the person who speaks first is Yunho, then in every scene, he speaks first. The opposite applies too, if you think it’s Jae :D