Nino's Birthday Surprise (3)

[aatash]

SEISHOKU CONTEST ENTRY #3

Rating: R (light)
Summary: Nino thinks letting go is a sign of adulthood. Sho and Ohno have other plans.
Notes: I couldn't have finished this in time without the support of a friend. They know who they are. <3

Comments

[waxrose]

Such a steady and slow feel to this fic, I like how everything falls into place! You write Nino very naturally. ♥

[nicefinalbeam]

Yeah, I'm a Nino whore, what can I say? :p

Thanks!

[maiaide]

I like the OT3 in OT5 dynamic. :)

[nicefinalbeam]

Thank you.

[zazasukie]

"We want you. And love you. Both of us, which is weird, but... wait, what else do I say? Surprise?" <-- The "Surprise" part cracked me up XD

[nicefinalbeam]

♥ YAY!

[still_ciircee]

I kind of lost it for a while at the beginning. Jun's 'when you were a baby' line just killed me. I just... YES. I love Arashi as a group.

I love the line 'This was his moment and he wasn't even there. This was something he'd always wanted and it had turned into some just because.' because that is a gorgeous description of what Nino was feeling and yet also highlighted the issue of what, really, was Sho thinking. I love how Nino turns him AWAY because he loves BOTH of them. And I absolutely adore the 'wait, what else do I say? Surprise?' line. *dies* Oh, Ohno. I also like the fact that Sho is NOT SURE HOW TO HAVE SEX as a threesome. YES PLZ.

[nicefinalbeam]

You know, I made a typo in this that I was sure fucked everything up. It was supposed to read "there was Satoshi to think about" and instead it said "there's". I don't think people noticed, but I agonized over that when it got posted. lol. Just sharing with you because... I can?

I love Arashi as a group as well. Can't help but bring them in when I know they were there. Oh Hanamaru Cafe. ♥

Anyway, thanks. :)