i like your section of the photo and the table and reflection. ditto on the table script. why not under "therapy" or at least in a stronger script on straight lines.
what's really distracting though is the girl in the back. in the stripper nurse costume? is this a comedy? something about bdsm? i'm confused.
Hmm, I thought with her being so blurry it wouldn't draw attention to what she's wearing. It's definitely a drama and without revealing too much of the story she represents the objectification of women within society... there are also a lot of sexual undertones to the entire piece but if it makes someone think of kinky/comedic things then it's all wrong.
Ya, I love the whole layout of the picture (maybe not the text as others have commented), and you're perfect. The costume does make me think it's likely going to kinky places though. The shortness might work if it looked more like an actual uniform rather than a costume.
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I really like the picture... your face really grabs the attention and I love the reflection.
I find the location of the title a little distracting, and I think the font could be more modern/sleek like the photo?
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ditto on the table script. why not under "therapy" or at least in a stronger script on straight lines.
what's really distracting though is the girl in the back. in the stripper nurse costume? is this a comedy? something about bdsm? i'm confused.
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