In Clearest Night (2/2)

[seerargent]

Title: In Clearest Night (2/2)
Rating: R (for language only), Gen
Characters: Dean, Sammy, John
Word Count: 7,032/13,870
Disclaimer: The characters are sadly not mine. I’m just sticking pins into Winchesters for fun and angst. Sorry about the holes!
A/N: Very belatedly for the

Comments

[iamstealthyone]

Hey, this was my prompt! :) It’s great to see it come to life. I like what you’ve done with it, the epic feel you gave it with the boys going on a journey to find their father. Of course Dean wouldn’t want to sit still and wait, he’d want to go out there and save John. He and Sam did a good job taking care of each other along the way … aww, boys. :)

Favorite lines:

He winced as he bent to grab one of the damp towels off the floor and trudged back into the bathroom, muttering under his breath as bits of bile and stomach juice flaked off with every step.

Eew! The goo these boys get into.

Dean loved whupping Sammy’s ass over Demon Scrabble. Sammy knew it; Dean knew it.

Demon Scrabble? Too funny!

‘Come here,’ Dean said softly, wrapping it around him before letting the cocoon that was Sammy wriggle onto his lap.

Aww, cocoon!Sammy sounds so cute.

‘Wherever he is, whoever he is, he’s not here. It’s just the two musketeers to the rescue.’

There used to be three.

Oh, boys.

There was only one thing left in Dean’s eyes now, and

Wow!

[seerargent]

It had an epic feel? ::grins:: Wonder how that slipped in? Sammy must have left the stable door open. Glad you enjoyed the story - and you give me back favourite quotes. Thank you, but it is I who should be giving thanks to you for writing such a wonderful inspirational prompt (it was so cool I'm now writing the companion story from Dean's p.o.v. - you created a monster) - I saw it and I couldn't steal it quick enough (a few other fangirls tried to fight me for it, but I SPN!Fu! kicked them till they gave up). Although I have to admit that some of them ran away the moment I started screaming "My angsty prompt! My precious" in the middle of the community ;) Sorry I had to age the wee boys up a few years, just really wanted to see them determined to save John ::sigh:: Poor John. Warm and toasty and suffering in hell.

Thanks again for your comments (and I love your stealthy icon!)

Re: Wow!

[iamstealthyone]

Glad you liked the prompt so much!

(a few other fangirls tried to fight me for it, but I SPN!Fu! kicked them till they gave up). Although I have to admit that some of them ran away the moment I started screaming "My angsty prompt! My precious" in the middle of the community ;)

LOL!

I'm now writing the companion story from Dean's p.o.v.

Cool. :)

[seerargent]

Why thanks, you always do say the kindest things ::blushes:: and goes back to cutting 10,000 words from the sequel - it's one of those days - I just keep telling myself that it will be all the better to angst you with in the end ;) Now where's that really big machete?

[saberivojo]

I woke up at 3isham. Stumbled to the computer and clicked on this. Now it is 4:23. Good fic, enough to make me stay up before the ass crack of dawn to read.

I love how the boys have a plan, a back up plan, that they have been drilled on how to handle anything. I love their tenacity.

Am going back to bed, too tired to comment.

[seerargent]

Bed, immediately!!!! Bed=good. Stay there till a sane hour. But thank you for sleep-commenting *G* Come back when you're conscious and have had coffee.

[pinkphoenix1985]

hon, I just finished reading this and I really enjoyed it!

[seerargent]

Aha! So this is what you were talking about. Glad you enjoyed it. Was one of my really early things. I just put it up on the comm cos the rest of the series is coming out of my brain in the next few months. Still have to explain Gerry.

The immediate sequel (from Dean's pov) will be very different. Darker (heh - how did that happen?), the whole series gets darker darker darker (oh well you've read ADit so you know where it goes). The 5th one will be angst city.

But don't worry there are some lighter crack things coming out between them.

[pinkphoenix1985]

COOL!! can't wait! although I love your crack!fics more ;P you crack me up!

[seerargent]

It's easy because I start with a broken brain in the first place ...