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[taradiane]

Title: Underneath It All
Author: taradiane
Rating: PG-13
Word Count: 5,561

(This fic was written for a comm which will soon be unveiled...)

Comments

[anyotherknight]

Guh. I love your Draco. The mention of the teenager in the shop and Hermione's little speech were fabulous additions.

[taradiane]

Thank you! I'll take that as the highest compliment, as I don't normally write from Draco's viewpoint and am typically more proficient with Harry.

[anyotherknight]

I think that's maybe why Draco struck me so. I'm used to reading Harry through you; Draco was new and exciting and deliciously vulnerable in his disfunctions.

[taradiane]

Yeah, I should prod my Draco muse a bit more often...

[crimisondust]

Ahaha I love it
Harry is a confused emotional mess,
Draco is an insecure priss,
and it bloody works!
Thank you, I can go to sleep now and have happy dreams. ^__^

[taradiane]

Haha, excellent.

[red_rahl]

Oh, your Draco and Harry are so very vivid and real to me! Poor Draco and his insecurities and Harry with his own and I love that some how, some way, they were able to work back to what was really important and what was always there, if unrecognized.

I love that build up, of Draco's doubts and Harry's culiminating in that big fight. My heart broke a little and I had to hold it tightly as I read on, hoping it'd work out. I love the insights into Harry's touching, Draco's worries about others' opinions, even Hermione and how she pulled through her own problems...

Guh, I'll just say I really adore this story and leave it at that...I really adore the last part too...*adores Draco, Harry, and you*

[taradiane]

They'll always find their way back to each other as long as I'm writing it. ;-)

Thank you so much for the review! I'm very grateful.

[oboros]

this is beautiful.

[taradiane]

Thanks. Glad you liked it!

[hearts_n_roses]

Ahhhh...so wonderfully fluffy, but yet so in character.

Love it!

[taradiane]

Thank you!