Wash Away, PG-13, John/Aeryn, Farscape

Aug 25, 2011 20:18

Title: Wash Away
Author: Virkatjol
Rating: PG-13
Summary: John goes after Aeryn when she takes her prowler down to a planet. Set around Fractures. Written for farscape_land prompt challenge.
Disclaimer: Not mine. WISH THEY WERE. PS I GLOMPED BEN LAST SAT.

A/N: his is for dizzydame you're my other half for writing and ILU! Thanks to valhallalilly for the BETA ILUALBxC+CSFM.


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farscape, pairing: john/aeryn, rating pg-13, author: virkatjol

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dizzydame August 26 2011, 01:19:45 UTC
I love this. <3 Aeryn especially is so heart breaking in it and you don't need to be in her POV to know exactly what it is she's feeling. In fact, that it ISN'T in her POV just makes it stand out all the more. You get raw emotion without that instant rationalization, instead it's realizing what's wrong as John does, and having to accept it.

"You always get your frelling way. Not now John." I can just hear her saying that. I love it. That line just stood out when I read it in perfect AERYN voice.

I love that she touches him and you know she's imagining it's the other John,

Reading this you kind of know nothing else is going to happen in that hotel room and it's kind of okay. It fits in fluidly with canon.

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virkatjol August 26 2011, 11:59:20 UTC
I'm not sure why I didn't switch POV's like i normally do as much in this fic, but i'm glad you like it. <3333

I love hearing her in my head too and she definitely spoke that line to me as well. I'm glad it worked for you too!!!

She needs it. I feel so bad for her.

<33333 Maybe when they wake up. Some comfort sex, or he fingers her? hehehe

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valhallalilly August 26 2011, 01:20:00 UTC
SPAMMY SPAM!

YOU KNOW ALL YOUR MINIONS LOVE IT WHEN YOU GET IMPATIENT.

Oh man I love edits...

I've tried to restart this comment 3 times. EACH IS WORSE THAN THE LAST...

I really love them in this though John is perfectly John, and so in love with her and I love Aeryn not quite able to differentiate between them yet. Such glorious angst and character study and h/c-ness
Just amazing dear.

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virkatjol August 26 2011, 12:00:29 UTC
EDITS ARE THE BEEEEST!!!!!

<33333333333333

I'm glad i didn't lose them in the angst. It was hard. So glad you like my charactery things.

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karen_b August 26 2011, 01:52:22 UTC
Oh, so very bittersweet. But I really like how supportive he was being.

Wonderfully done!

Now i everyone would leave me alone, I could read the other one you posted! LOL

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virkatjol August 26 2011, 12:01:06 UTC
He just wants her. No matter what. <33333333 GAH how are they so amazing?

Glad you liked it!!

mmm porn... hehe

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virkatjol August 26 2011, 12:01:48 UTC
yeah, it was hard to find all that and put it down. They are perfection and really the best OTP of all time.

Thanks for reading!

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virkatjol December 25 2011, 23:22:23 UTC
SOMETIMES I GET ANGST AND IDK WHERE IT COMES FROM OK?

SO HAPPY YOU LIKED IT THOUGH!!!! <33333333

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