Comments | see_the_horizon: Severus/Lily: "Home"

hintofawhisper in see_the_horizon

Severus/Lily: "Home"

Aug 01, 2007 17:52

This is rather short, but it was an idea that came to me last night and I felt that I just had to write it. I kept the sentences shortly structured because I felt it helped the mood of the story. But still, I think it's worth posting. It's up to your comments for me to know if I was right. ;D

Title: Home
Rating: PG (K+)
Word Count: 620
Pairings/ ( Read more... )

severus/lily, lily evans, severus snape, fanfiction, rating: all ages

Comments 78

tainted_crimson August 1 2007, 22:45:02 UTC

Damn you, you made me cry!

::sobs:: It was lovely, really.

And now I'm gonna go listen to horribly sad music and sob for the poor man.

hintofawhisper August 2 2007, 00:43:47 UTC

xD Sorry I made you cry.

And thank you! :D I'm glad you enjoyed the fic. :)

Oh, yes, I know... poor Snape. :(

snevansdramione August 1 2007, 22:53:00 UTC

*sniffles* That's such a beautiful ending. And very original, too, with them both being eleven again. Back when it was all good. It broke my heart when she said, "I waited for you a long time, Sev."

Oh man, now I have to go rewatch one of my favorite YouTube videos about Snevans in the afterlife, because the song just fits so perfectly.

Once again, beautiful work!

alenar August 1 2007, 23:17:46 UTC

There are You Tube videos about them?

snevansdramione August 1 2007, 23:38:35 UTC

Yes!

Here's the link to my YouTube profile: http://www.youtube.com/profile?user=SnevansDramione <---- There are a handful of videos under my favorites list. But my top three favorites are as follows:

Far Away (Severus/Lily): http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=R-B_DepBFhk <---- This one is the one I was talking about in my first comment. The song just is so perfect. Obviously, with the lack of Lily and Snevans footage, the person had to be creative, so s/he used HP footage and then clips from two other movies starring Kirsten Dunst (sp?) as "Lily." Despite that, s/he does an AWESOME job of making it work and look quite realistic, IMO.

Broken - Severus Snape (The Prince's Tale): http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ccShS-px5KQ <---- Once again, the creator/ess used "flashback" footage from another movie, Sky High, ( ... )

addictivish August 2 2007, 02:36:35 UTC

OMG LOL at both of you, I was watching the Lily/Severus video to "Your Guardian Angel" and I gasped when I found out you were listening to the same song.

Clicky! Yes, isn't it awesome? Oh, and this one too.

Your fic is lovely. <3 I love happy endings between them, it acts as a balm. I do hope you'll write more. :)

Thread 7

randomneses August 1 2007, 22:56:36 UTC

Her grin lights up her face, her long red hair blows about from the wind, and his breath catches.

"Lily."

She is dressed in her Gryffindor robes.

And he realizes. They are eleven again.
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She pulls him to her again, and he takes in a whiff of her dark red hair.

He closes his eyes at this, his face wet.

He was home at last.

This definitly brought on some tears. Very short and sweet ♥

hintofawhisper August 2 2007, 00:48:24 UTC

Thank you! :D I'm glad you enjoyed the fic. :)

tju_tju_tju_tju August 1 2007, 23:15:38 UTC

Oh, that was so lovely. *sighs happily* It was perfect. Amazing job.

hintofawhisper August 2 2007, 00:49:13 UTC

Thank you! :D I'm glad you think so, and that you enjoyed it. :)

alenar August 1 2007, 23:17:25 UTC

*sniffle*

Really sweet. Good job!

hintofawhisper August 2 2007, 00:50:15 UTC

Thank you! :D I'm glad you liked the story. :)