jack/kate: "those small steps"

Mar 30, 2009 18:55

Title: Those Small Steps
Rating: pg-13
Fandom: Lost
Pairing/Characters: Jack/Kate, Aaron, Juliet
Genre(s): Angst/Romance
Word Count: 2,867
Status: Complete
Spoilers: up to 5x10 "He's Our You"
Summary: She watched as he fell apart. In turn, she fell apart with him.
A/N: This is an early birthday gift to _milz_  ; sorry it's so angsty! XD

Back on the island, everything, all the glances, the flirtations, the conversations, and the sly way their arms wold brush against each other's as they trekked into the jungle together, it was all done slowly, incessantly bothered by interruptions. )

jack shephard, jack/kate, kate austen, fanfiction, rating: teen, lost, jate

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_milz_ March 31 2009, 01:02:23 UTC
OMGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGG. Unbelievableeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee.

I am so glad, so effing glad I friended you because, because, having a fic dedicated to me makes me the happiest biatch in the world right now.

First, don't apologize for the angst. I love the angst. The angst tears them apart but ultimately brings them closer together. I'm still waiting for the day when they finally scream at each other. I hate when Jack and Kate don't talk. I hate when all they do is share glances. Sharing glances is FINE when you're talking. Sharing glances (like the one they shared at the breakfast table) is not good. I want them to scream, want them to yell, want Kate to take her fists and punch Jack in the chest. I just want them to talk. OKOKOK, I'm done. Seriously.

But seriously, hun, this fic was fantastic. The part I loved most was Jack, Aaron and Kate at the park. Jack whispering in Aaron's ear. I mean, how sweet is that!? It was just perfect.

And Kate's pregnant. No doubt about it. I just hope Jack finds out sooner than later because man, I really want to see him hold his own child in those big bear arms. *sigh*

Thank you. Thank you so, so much for this.

Also, I know you wrote another fic and I didn't have the chance to post a comment but I'd like you to know that I did read it and I did love it. Man, us Jaters are so lucky you're writing for us.

*mwuah*

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hintofawhisper March 31 2009, 01:45:10 UTC
YAY, THANK YOU! *flails*

I am so glad, so effing glad I friended you because, because, having a fic dedicated to me makes me the happiest biatch in the world right now.

Aww... that's very sweet. The feeling is mutual, definitely; well, being happy that I friended you part. ;D

First, don't apologize for the angst. I love the angst. The angst tears them apart but ultimately brings them closer together.

Good, I'm very glad. I know a lot of people who don't like fics with angst. And I agree: angst does do that to Jate.

I'm still waiting for the day when they finally scream at each other. I hate when Jack and Kate don't talk. I hate when all they do is share glances. Sharing glances is FINE when you're talking. Sharing glances (like the one they shared at the breakfast table) is not good. I want them to scream, want them to yell, want Kate to take her fists and punch Jack in the chest. I just want them to talk. OKOKOK, I'm done. Seriously.

LOL, I completely understand. They never, ever talk or are open with each other at all and that's what frustrates me so much about them. But I love them so, and I know you do too. We can't win. XD
But, yes, I'm waiting for the day they actually COMMUNICATE. PLEASE.

But seriously, hun, this fic was fantastic. The part I loved most was Jack, Aaron and Kate at the park. Jack whispering in Aaron's ear. I mean, how sweet is that!? It was just perfect.

Thanks! I'm so glad you think so. And I was totally smiling when I wrote that part. Because that is, without a doubt, the most adorable thing ever. And I want to see it.

And Kate's pregnant. No doubt about it.

I believe it too. It just seems so obvious, really, with the whole proxy thing in "316". She was so Claire, I don't care what anyone else says.

I just hope Jack finds out sooner than later because man, I really want to see him hold his own child in those big bear arms. *sigh*

*dies* You and me both, seriously. :D

Thank you. Thank you so, so much for this.

You're very welcome! I'm so glad you enjoyed it.

Also, I know you wrote another fic and I didn't have the chance to post a comment but I'd like you to know that I did read it and I did love it.

No problem! It's just good to know you enjoyed it.

Man, us Jaters are so lucky you're writing for us.

*blushes* That means a lot, thank you. *huggles*

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