Revised November Poems

[sedeara]

Tower

Did I ever tell you how happy I was in that tower?
From there I saw blue water stretch out forever-
I thought the silver moon on the black lake
Was the essence of joy.

From there I saw blue water stretch out forever-
And a narrow bed is never lonely under a full moon.
Was the essence of joy
Lining up my shoes perfectly at the door?

And a narrow bed is

Comments

[lilstarling]

That villanelle is perfect. Also *I* miss your old tower, and I was just a visitor! :)