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jkkitty July 3 2013, 04:45:17 UTC
Very deep feelings and thoughts

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glennagirl July 3 2013, 12:58:03 UTC
It's interesting how they (the guys) can inspire us.

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laurose8 July 3 2013, 05:02:18 UTC
What an excellent use of the sea prompt! Lovely description, and character drawing, especially of them together. And that last line!

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glennagirl July 3 2013, 13:00:51 UTC
Thank you so much. I think the sound of the waves and expansiveness of the sea are often therapy for world weary souls.

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mrua7 July 3 2013, 12:39:12 UTC
This is possibly one of the most deep and powerful pieces you've ever written. Not only soul-searching, but looking beyond to the heavens, both me, I think, wanting comfort and answers. (whether they acknowledge the existence of a Deity or not) Their solace though, is their friendship... Wow.

Incredible take on the prompt! Brava!

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glennagirl July 3 2013, 13:03:41 UTC
Wow, thanks a lot for that. Sometimes the muse speaks of deeper things.

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carabele July 3 2013, 13:11:57 UTC
Very sad and poignant. Fitting of our men of great emotional depth who take so much upon their shoulders... and their hearts.

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glennagirl July 3 2013, 14:59:31 UTC
I think there are some very dark places in their souls, and empty places. Thanks for commenting.

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avrovulcan July 3 2013, 21:21:51 UTC
Very emotional piece, just proves they are human and care very deeply when lives are taken.

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glennagirl September 1 2018, 19:07:50 UTC
I missed this comment, and I miss avrovulcan being here among us. I hope all is well my friend.

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