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[secretnightfall]

Title: Breathe Me - Chapter Eleven
Pairing: Harry/Louis (Larry Stylinson)
Summary: Neither Harry, nor Louis, knew what they were getting into when they boarded the Titanic that day. Nobody could have been prepared for what was about to happen to them, because nobody knew just how much their lives would change within the next few days.

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[lyssanyssa]

ughh this can't end well. well i mean of course it will end well because it's amazing and your writing is perfection. what i mean is, it will end with me on the floor sobbing :') i can't wait for the next chapter ahhh ^.^

[secretnightfall]

Ahh, the argument was just something that had to happen in order for Harry to realise something important... which will be revealed next chapter. I'm glad you liked it! Thank you very much, love. That means a lot :). Xx

[cutienoi20]

WHAT THE HELL HARRY. LOUIS IS JUST TRYING TO MAKE SURE EVERYONE IS ALRIGHT AND NO ONES GONNA DIE BUT YOU'RE JUST TO SCARED TO ACCEPT THAT THE SHIP HAS BEEN HIT. UH. STUBBORN LITTLE UGH. Okay now that I'm done ranting about Harry. Fantastic job on how you display your characters! THE FEELS MAN. My Larry feels are unbearable today. Your writing is something to be really proud of! AMAZING!:) Xx

[secretnightfall]

Thanks so much! It's lovely to hear that. And finally, sombody who can see that Harry's just scared! Thank you! I've had loads of people come to me and be all 'Why is Harry being a dick?' and I felt like I hadn't really portrayed his reaction correctly, but i'm glad somebody's seen that. It'll be dealt with more in the next chapter though ;).

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