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Secret Life

Dec 06, 2008 22:00

Title: Secret Life
Pairings: Jensen/Jared
Rating: nc17
Summary: Jensen and Jared are both agents for an unknown department of defense for the United States government... Think Indiana Jones meets James Bond.

( Secret Life )

Comments 20

angels3 December 7 2008, 03:51:02 UTC

Good I'm glad Steve called him on being an ass and Jared being all embarrassed was funny.

rah_ram December 7 2008, 03:54:04 UTC

hehe :0) Glad you liked it.

thursdaywench December 7 2008, 05:03:10 UTC

heeeee. so cute!! and hmm the thought of Jared walking around in just a sheet is beyond sexaay.

rah_ram December 7 2008, 20:08:18 UTC

HAHA! I like that scene a lot, but I really like the last line of this :0)

anakin415 December 7 2008, 06:16:35 UTC

hee hee

rah_ram December 7 2008, 20:08:27 UTC

:o)

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rah_ram December 7 2008, 20:09:37 UTC

I thought about him coming out naked *nods* but that could possible look sillier than the sheet. Plus, he destroyed Jensen's bed to get the sheet *nods* again.

Nah, Steve is too easy going to know Jared is "the fox".

LOL... loustat December 7 2008, 09:38:37 UTC

Poor Jared. Well, I was expecting him to walk out butt naked, so at least he was concealed in a sheet! *Grins* And I'm so happy that for once, Jensen is the one feeling jealous towards Jared and Steve's friendship. Not that Jared was ever jealous of Jude, but ya know.Means Jensen actually cares about someone coming between them. But Steve is a loyal and honest friend, so I'm pretty sure Jensen is safe. Also, when Jensen said...

“Dormir bien, mon fantôme,” does that mean, "Sleep well, my phantom?"

Sorry, I'm a little rusty on my translation! *Grins* If so, I hope he means that in a good way! Once again, still loving your story and looking forward to the update!;D

Re: LOL... rah_ram December 7 2008, 20:12:56 UTC

hehe, I was going to have him naked, but he needed something to grab when he got surprised steve was there.

Supposed to say, "Sleep well, my ghost", I went around calling my french speaking people to find out if I got the translation right because all I can do is butcher the language, but they could be wrong lol.

hehe, thanks, I'm glad you love it :0)

Re: LOL... rule_number_7 July 8 2009, 00:30:49 UTC

I know you wrote this a while ago but I thought you still might like to know that it should be 'Dort bien' instead of 'Dormir bien' :)