Okay, section one so far so good, intriguing, only one sentence was a little awkward for me. Up above, the line about the fur reaching the ground, I kept reading it wrong.
...and given how the fur reached the ground I kept reading it as 'and given how far... reached the ground' It might've just been me but anytime a sentence trips me up I'll mention it. I'd realize it was fur than read it again and would read how far - fur reached so then I was throwing in far in front of fur when it wasn't there and it was the third time I slowed myself down and read it correctly and 'got' it.
So okay, going to follow John's link, just do these in order, but have to leave in a few minutes so not sure how far I'll get today. :)
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...and given how the fur reached the ground I kept reading it as 'and given how far... reached the ground' It might've just been me but anytime a sentence trips me up I'll mention it. I'd realize it was fur than read it again and would read how far - fur reached so then I was throwing in far in front of fur when it wasn't there and it was the third time I slowed myself down and read it correctly and 'got' it.
So okay, going to follow John's link, just do these in order, but have to leave in a few minutes so not sure how far I'll get today. :)
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