"Hospital" (Roy Mustang x Riza Hawkeye)

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I have had this little plot bunny in my head in different forms for literally months now. I was finally able to get this done. I hope you guys like it. I would love to hear some constructive criticism

Comments

[ghostfriendly]

Really lovely family; the story has a peaceful feeling, with lots of useful details. Roy's reaction to the crying made me smile. Great to read.

Lovely piece

[anonymous]

The part about having Riza shoot Roy if he becomes as obsessive as Maes was a nice touch. Naming the baby Maes can result in some disturbing scenarios, though. Example: Riza breastfeeding Maes.

I wonder what Maes Hughes has to say about that. ;)

[keirapop]

Awh that was really sweet! <3

[rurounigaijin]

aww that was so sweet. Made me smile the whole time I was reading it. Thank you :)