Comments | seaweed_fma: The Seed of the Fire- Chapter 1: "The Fire in His Eyes" (Hughes x Mustang)

seaweed_fma

The Seed of the Fire- Chapter 1: "The Fire in His Eyes" (Hughes x Mustang)

Jan 16, 2007 15:24

Fandom: Fullmetal Alchemist ( Read more... )

roy mustang, the seed of the fire, fan fiction, maes hughes, multi-chapter fic, fullmetal alchemist, roy x hughes

Comments 4

rukata January 17 2007, 01:20:09 UTC

That was so CUTE!!! I love it! can't wait to read more
=^_^=V

nomdeplume13 March 9 2007, 18:33:19 UTC

Very sweet. I love Maes's fascination with Roy's hair.

cornerofmadness April 7 2008, 03:12:49 UTC

interesting beginning

raceulfson January 4 2010, 02:59:04 UTC

I like the awkwardness of Maes confession, it felt very real. I also liked the things Maes noticed about Roy -"his gentle face" - and that Roy was the party boy and Maes the nerd. Loved that.