*twitch* That was... nngh. Beautiful? And I don't normally cry! *cough*
I wanted to save my comment for the last entry when I saw what you were doing with this (although it was hard to at times!) and here we are. The emotions were captured so well and the characterisation was near-perfect. You've got skill and I'd love to see you keep using it...
The twist at the end was really wonderful. So many death!fics become mired in cliches, so it was a relief to see yours kept up its standard, to say the least! People should feed you plotbunnies more often.
Just one point on the downside: the actual spelling and punctuation detracted a bit from the actual story. Do you have a beta, and if not, would you like one? I'd be more than happy to help if you did. :p
This is just what I wanted. *tries to restrain tears and fails*
Thanks for the dedication; that was right sweet of you! I can't write as fast or as well as you do, but I'll post my first HughesxMustang story, "One Night at Ishbal," very soon, as a thank you. My own libidinous plot bunnies are threatening to make that the first story in a series.
I made the mistake of Playing Placebo's Song to Say Goodbye while reading this...My head hurts now from all the crying you made me do. But that wouldn't stop me from adding this to my memories!
Thanks for friending me! I friended you right back, I look forward to reading more from you!
"Now go write me some Hughes x Mustang pr0n!!!" :)
It's ready. Want to do a beta read for me and hopefully suggest a better title and a summary? I can't invent titles or write summaries to save my neck!
I just found your journal, but I think I'm in love with it already. Espeacially with this fic... God, it is so beautiful. You manage to characterise all these feelings so damn well it leaves no doubt about what it was you wanted to say. Wish I could do the same in my own writings (though I write in finnish since I live here in Finland).
I don't cry when I read fanfiction. Never. Never before this, that is :|
Thank you for creating such a beautiful piece of art. Thank you.
*blush* Well... thanks.. I appreciate that! I dunno if you have read the rest of this series, but it makes more sense if you read all 5 of them. :) If you cant tell, these two are my favorite pairing, so I would expect to get more of this.. I am hoping that I am improving over time. This was written over a month ago. I would love to get feedback from you about the stuff I have written since then!
Thanks again! *hug*
A shame I cant read Finnish, but your English seems perfect! :) I would love to read your fics.
Maybe I should start writing in English too x) "perfect.." hih, thanks.
And yes, I read the whole serie of this damn sad and capturing fic. And again, I loved it ^^ And yes, after I found this palce, I got lost into it :D A day passed me by, but I didn't even notice it. My head was filled with cute stories about Mustang and Hughes *grin* I shall give my opinion 'bout them, too :D
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I wanted to save my comment for the last entry when I saw what you were doing with this (although it was hard to at times!) and here we are. The emotions were captured so well and the characterisation was near-perfect. You've got skill and I'd love to see you keep using it...
The twist at the end was really wonderful. So many death!fics become mired in cliches, so it was a relief to see yours kept up its standard, to say the least! People should feed you plotbunnies more often.
Just one point on the downside: the actual spelling and punctuation detracted a bit from the actual story. Do you have a beta, and if not, would you like one? I'd be more than happy to help if you did. :p
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Thanks for the dedication; that was right sweet of you! I can't write as fast or as well as you do, but I'll post my first HughesxMustang story, "One Night at Ishbal," very soon, as a thank you. My own libidinous plot bunnies are threatening to make that the first story in a series.
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Thanks for friending me! I friended you right back, I look forward to reading more from you!
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It's ready. Want to do a beta read for me and hopefully suggest a better title and a summary? I can't invent titles or write summaries to save my neck!
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I have never been a beta before, so I dont know how well I will do, but I will try as hard as I can!
send it to mail (at) seaweedotter (dot) (com)
Oooh, I cant wait! send it soon!!!
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I just found your journal, but I think I'm in love with it already. Espeacially with this fic... God, it is so beautiful. You manage to characterise all these feelings so damn well it leaves no doubt about what it was you wanted to say. Wish I could do the same in my own writings (though I write in finnish since I live here in Finland).
I don't cry when I read fanfiction. Never. Never before this, that is :|
Thank you for creating such a beautiful piece of art. Thank you.
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If you cant tell, these two are my favorite pairing, so I would expect to get more of this.. I am hoping that I am improving over time. This was written over a month ago. I would love to get feedback from you about the stuff I have written since then!
Thanks again! *hug*
A shame I cant read Finnish, but your English seems perfect! :) I would love to read your fics.
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Maybe I should start writing in English too x) "perfect.." hih, thanks.
And yes, I read the whole serie of this damn sad and capturing fic. And again, I loved it ^^ And yes, after I found this palce, I got lost into it :D A day passed me by, but I didn't even notice it. My head was filled with cute stories about Mustang and Hughes *grin* I shall give my opinion 'bout them, too :D
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