Comments | seaweed_fma: After the Fall: Chapter 5 (Roy x Ed)

seaweed_fma

After the Fall: Chapter 5 (Roy x Ed)

Jan 03, 2007 14:33

Title: After the Fall, Chapter 5 ( Read more... )

roy mustang, fan fiction, multi-chapter fic, edward elric, fullmetal alchemist, roy x ed, after the fall

Comments 8

clinicly8insane January 3 2007, 22:59:11 UTC

FIRST REPLY

I love it! its so cute! Nyaa~! i wanna cuddle it..

lynx212 January 3 2007, 23:38:34 UTC

Well done. I can't wait for the next!

dragonimp January 3 2007, 23:56:17 UTC

Short, but really cute. Who wouldn't want to see Ed naked? ^_^

hey roy come on!!! anonymous January 4 2007, 08:03:06 UTC

where's the next part???? But I really like Roy Mustang that way...hehe

asm613 April 4 2007, 06:31:56 UTC

i'm glad that you started to make your chapters longer in your future stories. not that it's a big deal to click 6 times; but i would rather have only had to go through 2 or 3 pages. too bad you didn't let roy mentally describe ed's boxer clad body. loved the ed catching roy on the blushing and the way he did it. well the way you wrote that he did it. cause after all; ed is a fictional character and you are a real person who wrote this story