Nicely written, again. Just weird to see Hughes so down when he usually is all-bright-nothing-worries-me kind of a man. I hope they make thru this somehow!
Believe me, it isnt normal Hughes, but it makes sense in the scheme of things. I mean if I was about to lose my lover, I would be sad too, even though I am normall a very goofy and upbeat person (much like Hughes)
That's absolutely true. I'd be very very sad too... I just haven't seen that normal Hughes almost at all in this fic! I miss him! :D
I have to say, that I really really liked Roy in the end of this chapter <3
"Roy's face darkened, a mix of anger, frustration and confusion on his features. He crossed his arms. "Alright, Maes. You need to tell me what the hell is wrong. I thought we just stopped being mad." "
It was actually very hard to write. I have done quite a few fics in my short career, but admittedly none of them so far have gotten this emotional. Hehe, I liked that line as well. I hope that it comes off as Roy being in character. I know Maes pretty much isnt cause he so upset, but I hope it is still enough like Maes to be believeable.. is it?
Noooooooooooooooo...Dammit! I like Gracia, but could she not be in this? Couldn't Roy and Maes stay together? Great story, but the emotions this is pulling from me are so intense! *runs off screaming*
and Hughes is supposed to be the smart one? in military intelligence? doesn't seem so here. and what was he thinking begging roy to make love to him just before he knew he was going to tell him of his infidelity. and after spending all day and lots of his money looking for roy; wouldn't that suggest that he would have hopped up and followed roy out of the alley almost immediately? You confuse me and you break my heart. you are mean. i can tell by the titles of the future chapters that this will not be a fairy tale ending.
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Nicely written, again. Just weird to see Hughes so down when he usually is all-bright-nothing-worries-me kind of a man. I hope they make thru this somehow!
Damn that Hughes...
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I have to say, that I really really liked Roy in the end of this chapter <3
"Roy's face darkened, a mix of anger, frustration and confusion on his features. He crossed his arms. "Alright, Maes. You need to tell me what the hell is wrong. I thought we just stopped being mad." "
I love this line :)
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Hehe, I liked that line as well. I hope that it comes off as Roy being in character. I know Maes pretty much isnt cause he so upset, but I hope it is still enough like Maes to be believeable.. is it?
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