after reading so much of your other work i am saddened to say that i am disappointed with this story up to this point (the last 3 chapters anyways). "Thier boss"...should be spelled "their". at first i thought it was a mistake; but then i saw you continually mispell the word so i had to say something. that "i befoe e except after c" rule is only right half the time. i don't know why they even drummed this into our heads in school. and isn't ed a "dog" of the military at this point? He would need his commanding officers permission to take a leave. so no matter how intimidating izumi may be; ed would be obliged by protocol to ask for permission. officially izumi dragging him off is AWOL and can be arrested. I did like the way ed called from the train station; in defiance of his teacher, to let roy know where he would be. if ed didn't care he wouldn't have done that. so that's sweet. you have so many "ongoing" stories that i've started to read; how am i going to remember where and when to look for updates if i forget the darn title? i do enjoy your writing though; so thanks again. don't know how you find the time to do all you do with being in school and all.
"Thier boss"...should be spelled "their". at first i thought it was a mistake; but then i saw you continually mispell the word so i had to say something. that "i befoe e except after c" rule is only right half the time. i don't know why they even drummed this into our heads in school. and isn't ed a "dog" of the military at this point? He would need his commanding officers permission to take a leave. so no matter how intimidating izumi may be; ed would be obliged by protocol to ask for permission. officially izumi dragging him off is AWOL and can be arrested. I did like the way ed called from the train station; in defiance of his teacher, to let roy know where he would be. if ed didn't care he wouldn't have done that. so that's sweet.
you have so many "ongoing" stories that i've started to read; how am i going to remember where and when to look for updates if i forget the darn title? i do enjoy your writing though; so thanks again. don't know how you find the time to do all you do with being in school and all.
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