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seaweed_fma March 2 2007, 14:51:53 UTC
Hehe.. Hmm. I may need to try that.. I found a great version of the whole song sung by Vic accidentaly on line just last night

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gucci84 March 2 2007, 14:08:38 UTC
*Dies to the thought of WAITING for the next chapter*

God this rules. I just read all the chapters and I'm flipping out with anticipation here. Very impatient aren't I?

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seaweed_fma March 2 2007, 14:54:07 UTC
Dont worry, I am very impatient myself. I want to continue this story, even though I have other ones I really need to work on. I would bet I have the next chapter done by this weekend. :)

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secretfreaky March 4 2007, 20:06:50 UTC
Thank you so much for the update. I love this story...

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seaweed_fma March 5 2007, 03:41:59 UTC
Thanks. I am glad I have a path for it now. I was stuck for a while. :)

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asm613 April 4 2007, 08:12:28 UTC
another short chapter that did nothing to make logic of the previous chapter.

((He sighed and pulled a note that had plastered itself on his forehead when he fell asleep the night before.
"Ed, come back. I miss you.")) the previous quote was great. and the fact that he was worried and protective about ed.

other than those parts i have no idea why or where the rest of the chapter is heading or even means. just like the last half of the previous chapter. But maybe it will become clear in the next chapter...that's the biggest reason i hate short chapters.

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nomdeplume13 April 8 2007, 18:13:14 UTC
I liked Roy's slip in formailty with Ed's name, making Hawkeye suspicious.

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