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dedra April 3 2006, 08:59:59 UTC
OMG that was hilarious! Please, do continue this one...the snark...the lurves...the laffs...too good to end here!

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moscow_watcher April 3 2006, 13:06:55 UTC
Thanks for commenting!
I'm thinking about expanding the story but right now I can't figure out a plot bunny that could trigger the continuation of the fun...

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sammywol April 3 2006, 09:21:07 UTC
Oh! That was just lovely! Thankyou!!! Pity you stopped where you did - well, stylistically dead right but, sighs! - I'll just have to make sure my imagined version of Angel's reaction will pass muster (especially if Spike didn't manage to get his pants zipped back up).

The conversation was just perfect, down to the cranes and excavators (not that that wasn't a better idea than what they went with in the show) but I don't think anything can beat the teaser "Shut up, Spike! You always find the most inappropriate time to try my patience!".

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moscow_watcher April 3 2006, 13:16:38 UTC
Thanks for commenting. I was unsure if I could make them sound funny, because English is foreign language for me, and sometimes I can't "feel" the words I write.

I'll just have to make sure my imagined version of Angel's reaction will pass muster (especially if Spike didn't manage to get his pants zipped back up).

*Evil cackle* I really don't know if he managed to zip them! It's up to reader's naughty imagination! I even don't know if there are also Wes, Gunn, Fred and Harm in Angel's office... :)

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petzipellepingo April 3 2006, 09:52:57 UTC
In that abandoned house I practically dragged you into my bed. And? Nothing. The next day I wormed my way into your bed - I swallowed my damn pride, I practically wrote on my forehead "Spike, make love to me!" And guess what? Again - nothing! You just went asleep!"
"I... I didn't. I was awake until you went asleep!"
"You mean you've been lying beside me all awake and counting sheep? I was waiting for a slightest sign of your attention and you were pretending you're sleeping?!"
"I bloody wanted you to get rest!"
::dies:: Hee! I may have to re-watch those scenes. This is brilliant.

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moscow_watcher April 3 2006, 13:20:30 UTC
Thanks for commenting - I'm glad you liked.
I may have to re-watch those scenes.
Pay attention that Buffy, snuggling with Spike, caresses his fingers with her thumb. Our naughty girl definitely wants to turn him on!

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moscow_watcher April 3 2006, 13:25:53 UTC
Thanks! I deliberately abstained from elaboration of this moment because I wanted to leave it up to reader's imagination!

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cutiesaiyajin April 3 2006, 10:34:53 UTC
Bwahaha, that was hilarious! I hope there's more.

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moscow_watcher April 3 2006, 13:28:48 UTC
Thanks!
I hope I'll get the courage to write more Spuffy in English!

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