Fic: Apology for Declining an Invitation to Dine (Part 1 of 2)

[eurydice72]

It is technically still the 23rd here in California, so I'm coming in under the wire for my second posting day. I had all these plans about the one-shot I wanted to post today, but, as it happens, things didn't work out the way I wanted. So, what I've got is the first half of the one-shot. I'm going to post the second half on Sunday's Free-for-all

Comments

[zanthinegirl]

This is a fabulous start! Great details; I especially liked the tactile feel of the floaty demon’s fingers. I’ve missed your stories!

[slaymesoftly]

Chocolate Spike - mmmmmmm. Can't wait to hear how he got out of the restaurant....

[double_dutchess]

Claps hands excitedly -- we're getting the story!! This puts me in the mood for reading Charms of the Clarion again; it's been a while.

The Spike image is awesome, thanks for sharing it!

[hobbituk]

Charms is one of my very favourite fics. I re read it when I am feeling blue and it cheers me up every time. I am beyond excited to find this new little gem....

[thenewbuzwuzz]

"The weight of it sent a shiver down her spine, not in the old Spike’s a killer way but more of the crap, I pushed a friend too hard kind of way."
Yay for that sweet, sweet Enemies to Friends arc

"The calculating gleam that appeared in his eyes should’ve been her first warning."
:D I love him

I'm enjoying the chocolate sauce suspense. No idea how this is going to turn into a chocolate sauce story. :)

"played Bonfire Night"
Nice Spike voice

A-ha! There's the chocolate! :D

"the head of a shark and the suit of a Sinatra"
heeee!

I like how creepy Leora is. :)