Fic: Break Up With Your Girlfriend, I'm Bored

Jun 21, 2019 13:14


Title: Break Up With Your Girlfriend, I'm Bored
Author: fancyflautist
Era/season/setting: early Season 2
Rating: NC-17

Notes: this is a super strange piece based on an Ariana Grande song. The music video for the song can be found here. Enjoy!
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era: btvs s2, rating: nc-17, form: fic, creator: fancyflautist

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thenewbuzwuzz June 21 2019, 20:31:30 UTC
Whoa, what a title :)

"why, for once in her life, couldn’t she just have what she wanted? A bad boy, not a serial-killer boy."
The million dollar question! Don't worry, Buffy, this serial-killer boy gets better.

"“Break up wit’ your girlfriend, yeah yeah, cause I’m bored” she sang, swaying across the room, dancing sluttier that she’d ever let herself in public."
She's so *sixteen*, I love it (not that there's anything wrong with singing by one's lonesome or being sixteen!)

"he was mostly curious as to what she did after their fights when he could smell her arousal as they danced"
he's asking the right questions :)

"She couldn’t be thinking of him, he knew that. It was probably some high school poofter who didn’t know how to open his eyes and see what was right in front of him. He tried to ignore the underlying jealousy that thought brought up."
But boy, is he in for a surprise ^^

"There was only one thing he could do…"
ahahahaha, love that scene break! "5 minutes later..." (of course some time passed, but the transition straight to the next part was so much fun)

"Heard you the other night"
IT'S THE NEXT DAY, that's so Spike! He decided what he wanted, and then, by golly, he WENT for it. ^^

"damn if she was going to look a gift horse in the mouth.
Much, anyways."
This gift horse's mouth is full of very sharp teeth! Looking at least a little is a very good idea.

"Dream about the Big Bad often, pet?”"
Hee, busted! :)

Nice composition there, with the ending turning the title upside down!

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fancyflautist June 22 2019, 04:32:53 UTC
Thank you for the lovely comment, your commentary cracked me up :D I'm so glad you liked it!!

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