Fic: Ostara Blessings

[fancyflautist]

Title: Ostara Blessings
Author: fancyflautist
Era/season/setting: S6/S7
Rating: PG (minor language)
Summary: Willow enlists the help of the Scoobies for a big abundance ritual for Ostara.  Meanwhile, Buffy is trying to push forward in her relationship with Spike. Featuring grass facts, a hell-bunny, and an original Wiccan ritual!

Comments

[the_wiggins]

So fun! I love the kinder, gentler version of s6-7 that you've come up with. Spike and Buffy's agreement to be friends and then Buffy's attempts to convince Spike that they should be more are very adorable.

Since you mentioned editing mistakes, I did see a few little things. There's a spot at the begining of the trip to the mall where a sentence is started but not finished (maybe it got cut out accidentally when you pasted it over here or something?). And there's also a few minor formatting mistakes like double quotation marks inside of double quotation marks and hyphens used instead of dashes. But overall a great read and I found the story very enjoyable.

I loved the details of the ritual and the fact that Buffy and Spike had to fight a demon, which happened to be a giant evil Easter Bunny!

And this was my favorite quote:
“Oh, I’ll give you adjectives! Infuriating, impossible, pain-in-my-ass...”
She looked at him thoughtfully. “Is that an adjective?”
It's just very cute and very them.

Also, feel free to hit me up if you plan on posting to AO3 or EF and would like it beta'd first. But in any case, super fun story, thanks for sharing!