Stulti #4: Fic. Erm.

[stultiloquentia]

Hiya: I'm back. Erm. I've been fussing for a month with this fantastic piece of pr0n. The dirty parts were all lined up fine, but I couldn't for the life of me make it click as a whole. And then two days ago I realized I was writing the wrong pairing. I was doing my damnedest to force a potentially really interesting Bangel story onto Spike

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[danaid_luv]

He flings up his hand somewhere between a "vocabulary exhausted" and a warding gesture, but ends with a fist. "-You! Get out!"

Loved this.

"You're yours. OK, I'm about to reveal my spectacular arrogance, but I've always sort of thought of you as, well. Mine. My arch-nemesis, my pain in the ass, charity case, punching bag, sounding board, lover-" She thumps back against the chainlink.

And this.

By the time they've finished, dawn's only a couple hours off, so they locate a hotel.

A bit of nervous circling ensues.

Um, and that, too!

But I honestly, truly CANNOT for the life of me *hear* Spike use the word 'boner'. ??? :\

[stultiloquentia]

But I honestly, truly CANNOT for the life of me *hear* Spike use the word 'boner'. ??? :\

BWAHheeheehee! Really? It's true that I didn't run that (or anything else) through a Britpicker. I shall have to investigate. :D

[femmenerd]

Actually, the word "boner" kind of threw me off too but I was distracted by the goodness of what came before and after that.

[treadingthedark]

THe word boner stood out to me to but for some reason, in a really good way, I liked it when Spike said it.

Great story.

[stultiloquentia]

*snort* I threw the matter open for debate on my journal, and it's got everybody very excited!

Thanks. :)