(Don't) Call Me Love 1/2

[kallysten]

Here's my second offering for the day. I've debated with myself about posting it at all because it didn't turn out the way i anticipated and i'm not sure i like it. My beta tells me it's worth posting so i guess i will, and hope that someone enjoys it.

(Don't) Call Me Love
Future-fic
PG-13
~14,000 words
Much thanks to starrynights24 for the beta'ing. Any

Comments

[fangfaceandrea]

whoa! I love how you build up this future universe in few but clear cut words. And how they develop this strange relationship. So far I'm loving and I I'm off to read some more XD

[swsa]

I really love this. I like how you sort of have the relationship shifting from this mentor/mentee, almost sibling-esque thing, to something more uncertain. Great job! I think you were being too hard on yourself. *g*

[deborahw37]

Oh I really like this! I wasn't sure when I started reading but you caught my interest and held it and that last line is perfect.

I think I saw mention of part 2.. off to find it

[gillo]

Wonderful!

[missus_grace]

Great premise! Can't wait to see where this goes.