Part 2 of last week
Last week, I had a scene from Dream Dancing that I didn't use. This is the conclusion of that scene. If you want to know how the character really fares, you can buy DREAM DANCING as an e-book or in a local bookstore or on line at Amazon, B&N.com.
The night security guard did his rounds on the floors when he saw an ajar door at the end of the hallway. He didn't pay it much mind except someone left stuff in front of the door. He saw a hand. He got no response when he grabbed the hand. He pushed the door, but the person’s body blocked it from opening. He ran his hand along the person’s arm until he could feel a shoulder. He pushed the shoulder enough so he could open the door.
He saw a girl with a bloody face and torn clothes. He fumbled for his walkie-talkie and called for back up. An ambulance took the girl to the hospital in time to save her life.
The night security guard did his rounds on the floors when he saw an ajar door at the end of the hallway. He didn't pay it much mind except someone left stuff in front of the door. He saw a hand. He got no response when he grabbed the hand. He pushed the door, but the person’s body blocked it from opening. He ran his hand along the person’s arm until he could feel a shoulder. He pushed the shoulder enough so he could open the door.
He saw a girl with a bloody face and torn clothes. He fumbled for his walkie-talkie and called for back up. An ambulance took the girl to the hospital in time to save her life.