layhan's adventures in watersports

[seafoamblues]

title: layhan's adventures in watersports
pairing: lu han/yixing
rating: nc-17
length: ~6,275 words
warnings: watersports (ingestion, assistance, penetration & during coitus), frottage, dirty talk, mentioned toy usage, unprotected sex
summary: Yixing really has to pee, and Lu Han isn't Yixing's best friend for nothing.

notes: originally posted at relayficfest

Comments

[julyfix]

ok i'm back and i suck at leaving good comments but i'm gonna try ok????
i don't think i've seen anyone really dive into this kink so... artfully, and i really have to commend you on that. i mean, a little bit of watersport PLAY, more like bladder retention vs actual ingesting, so i think you've created something magnificent
it was so easy to coerce yixing into participating, i like the aspect of 'hidden desires' being brought up from the recesses of one's mind. something that was a convenience, esp something like that, is sure to stick with ANYONE (and luhan is incredibly lucky that yixing wasn't freaked out) and i like how they were fairly level-headed (even though drunk) when planning it out.
the setup was good, the actual scene was amazing, and jfc i love pee too so you will find no shame coming from me!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
this was really good *_* well written and well executed and believable, those kinky fucks. i was thinking about doing something like this (mostly bladder retention though because doing the full monty was a bit intimidating) and you just gave me the courage to touch that wip lmao
i love this i love you good job GOOD JOB

[seafoamblues]

thank u i was feeling very uncreative
NO YOUR COMMENTS ARE ALWAYS GOOD SHUSH *shoves you in a box*
unfortunately there just isn't enough :((((((( hahaha fuck i wish there was more i am shameless
YAYYYYYYYYYY PEE BUDDIES :'DDDDDD i'm crying heh
OH MY G OD
JILLIAN
IF U HAPPEN TO WRITE ANYTHING WITH EVEN LIKE A DROP OF PEE I WILL
PROBABLY PEE MYSELF IN HAPPINESS
AHHHHHHHHHHHHHH OH MY G O D PLEASE
thank you so much!! <33333