H8 - WIP #1 17 Jan 12
At long last, Here is my story "H8"
Furaffinity: http://www.furaffinity.net/view/7236857
DeviantArt part 1: http://mbridge1965.deviantart.com/art/H8-WIP-17-Jan-12-part-1-280033548
DeviantArt part 2: http://mbridge1965.deviantart.com/art/H8-WIP-17-Jan-12-part-2-280033850
(I can't believe I actually hit a size barrier. I can't post it on LJ because of the size. Anyway, it's SFW, unless you have a problem with humans/anthro (furry) marriages.)
The reason for it's posting was simple. At long last I:
a) understand what this really is. Kantuck told me this is a 'sketch story' In which it's just a quick sketch of a story. Like in art, when an artist is setting up a picture, they'd make light sketches, to reposition limbs, or see if this character is needed in the composition, or such.
b) It's also like the horse profile sketches I've done. It shows me what I can do ultimately. It's not one I can sell, even when I re-write this, but it's a start on my learning curve.
Critique is welcome, but understand I didn't spell check this since it is a WIP. It's dumped here, raw. I'm now in active development of the story. An informal outline is already about done, I'm now doing interviews on the characters to flesh them out (that'll take me time.) and doing some active work on the psychology of the two Hindvalians. So I can understand them better. That's been a major stumbling block.
Furaffinity: http://www.furaffinity.net/view/7236857
DeviantArt part 1: http://mbridge1965.deviantart.com/art/H8-WIP-17-Jan-12-part-1-280033548
DeviantArt part 2: http://mbridge1965.deviantart.com/art/H8-WIP-17-Jan-12-part-2-280033850
(I can't believe I actually hit a size barrier. I can't post it on LJ because of the size. Anyway, it's SFW, unless you have a problem with humans/anthro (furry) marriages.)
The reason for it's posting was simple. At long last I:
a) understand what this really is. Kantuck told me this is a 'sketch story' In which it's just a quick sketch of a story. Like in art, when an artist is setting up a picture, they'd make light sketches, to reposition limbs, or see if this character is needed in the composition, or such.
b) It's also like the horse profile sketches I've done. It shows me what I can do ultimately. It's not one I can sell, even when I re-write this, but it's a start on my learning curve.
Critique is welcome, but understand I didn't spell check this since it is a WIP. It's dumped here, raw. I'm now in active development of the story. An informal outline is already about done, I'm now doing interviews on the characters to flesh them out (that'll take me time.) and doing some active work on the psychology of the two Hindvalians. So I can understand them better. That's been a major stumbling block.