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scyllaya

Si vales valeo - Part Two

Feb 10, 2011 18:57

Click here to read the story: Numinous

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( Part Two )

verse: numinous, pairing: dean/gabriel, fanfiction, supernatural

Comments 19

cashay February 10 2011, 19:03:27 UTC

You just made my day awesome instead of crappy :D

The sex was totally hot <3 And the tattoo has to look incredible! They're so cute, but I totally can understand Sammy.

Will there be more to this? *puppy dog eyes*

scyllaya February 11 2011, 07:50:30 UTC

I'm so happy that you like this ^_^

I really should continue my other fic but yes... I have an almost idea how this could continue, so we'll see when I can get onto it ;)

cashay February 14 2011, 15:45:47 UTC

Yay *me is happy* Glad you'll continue it =)

scyllaya February 14 2011, 15:51:28 UTC

The next story is already up on my LJ :) There is a link on this entry now. Enjoy.

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scyllaya February 11 2011, 07:54:29 UTC

I usually don't write these two like this (Dean being the way he is), but that's what got out of the prompt for the first story.

And yes more Sam-Gabriel interaction would definitely be interesting.
I have no idea whether I'm gonna continue this, but I start to feel there is unresolved things in this story so there is a high chance.

Thanks for reading :)

cousinmary February 11 2011, 05:22:26 UTC

I really like these stories, however, I am starting to agree with Sam (which almost never happens.) I mean, I'd be so worried for Dean by this point! He's in a relationship with this super powerful being who's control, scares and marks him with a -huge- tattoo. I have to say, I'm glad Dean balked at the soul-marking because, seriously, dear god. I'm curious to see how Cas reacts to this whole situation, Bobby too. Something has to change in their relationship dynamic soon, 'cause yeah, Dean telling Sam not to challenge Gabe? Doesn't sit right. And any world where Dean isn't shooting his mouth off just isn't right.

scyllaya February 11 2011, 08:00:42 UTC

Yes Dean's charater and behaviour towards Gabriel is pretty much defined by what happened in the first story between them. You can believe me it is unusal to me to write them without their usual dynamic.

Gabriel definitely has a dominant position, and it is truly not very much like Dean to simply allow that.

After finishing this story I realized that there is unresolved tension. Sam not liking the situation and yes, Castiel and Bobby, I can already picture their words in this. We can all understant Sam I think.

Not sure about continuing this story, but it seems more likely by the second. Especially reading comments that point out the unanswered questions.

Thanks for reading and commenting, glad you like the story :)

cousinmary February 11 2011, 17:05:53 UTC

I really like this story verse, and while Dean is acting rather unDean-like after what happened, I think he'd eventually snap out of it (possibly after Sam confronts Gabe and Dean's protect!Sammy instinct kicks in.) At the same time, Gabe's gotta miss Dean's -'tude too, after all, it's part of why he fell for him. I'd love to read more :)

scyllaya February 11 2011, 17:12:31 UTC

I am actually in the middle of writing the next part. (already wrote two parts), so stay tuned for how the story continues. ;)

heavenreturned February 12 2011, 09:28:33 UTC

Beautiful story my dear!! As ALWAYS!! I adore your stories!! And I hope that our sigil/tattoo talk on twitter inspired this! If so we must chat more

scyllaya February 12 2011, 09:34:47 UTC

It absolutely did. You remember that I even prompted you a while back with the Dean getting a Gabriel-tat thing, so yeah it's from that time. I had to do it too ;D

And hey, this is still the story that started from your prompt, so it turned into a verse (I'm currently writing the third story), yeay!

So I'm glad you like it, I hope to post the next story soon :)

heavenreturned February 12 2011, 09:38:46 UTC

I have one in the works where Gabe is brought back with the sigil. But I can't finish it until I get Chapter 4 of Heart of your Soul written. I've been working on it vry hard.

scyllaya February 12 2011, 10:09:55 UTC

Well I wish you the best and I hope inspiration will slam you like a sledghammer then ;D

I wanted to start writing the Trinity verse again, but this Numious verse came alive under my hands and I'm working heavily on this one :)

(p.s. Just imagining RSJ's back with that sigil... hmm...)

You and I have a thing for big marks on these two, huh? XD

misaki_kaito January 23 2012, 21:16:22 UTC

I was noticing, perhaps you could get a Beta for your stories? Just to look over them and fix any errors they see, because I see little things that take away from the overall greatness of your works, and yeah. But this was great!

scyllaya January 23 2012, 21:42:55 UTC

I use beta for challenges, not for my regular work. I do spell-check even after I post stuff. English is not my mother-tongue, so there bound to be mistakes once in a while and with my WIP stories (the way this was posted for example) I didn't have time to get them beta-d. And unfortunately I definitely don't have time to get them betad and reposted again.
Please try to ignore the mistakes :)
But I'm glad you enjoyed it.

misaki_kaito January 23 2012, 21:45:30 UTC

I thought so- It seemed like mistakes that people would make if they weren't raised with English from birth- no offense meant, just that I make the same exact mistakes with Spanish and Hindi.

scyllaya January 23 2012, 21:48:38 UTC

Well, I do try my best, but there will always be mistakes, even with a beta, so as I said again, I can do nothing but ask you to please ignore them. Sorry.

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