Don't Think Twice; It's Alright

May 17, 2009 14:18

A beam of sunlight powers through the windows and hits Kris directly in the face. He closes his eyes tighter, unwilling to move. He’s comfortable, after all. It’s funny; he can’t remember the beds being this warm or this comfortable before. As he gives up on holding onto sleep, he begins to notice some things.

First of all, there’s a weight on his ( Read more... )

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emmiebby94 May 17 2009, 19:28:05 UTC
Don't murder the ending. D: It was quite enjoyable to read. I love how Kris was completely untroubled by the whole situation while Adam has a mild freak-out.

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scruffybunny May 18 2009, 06:46:17 UTC
Thanks. That ending and I fought for a good two hours before I finally settled with it. I just wasn't sure that it was landing correctly, if that makes any sense.

Also, I read a lot of fics where Kris is always freaking out, and Adam is cool-as-a-cucumber calm. So I figured that it would be fun to play with that dynamic. I dunno.

Anyway, glad you enjoyed it!

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equus07 May 17 2009, 19:47:24 UTC
Umm so, I LOVED THIS!
A small sound, like the one youd give in sympathy left my mouth when I read this: But as soon as he makes a noticeable motion, Adam frowns in his sleep and reflexively tightens his grip, drawing Kris’ back flat against his chest.

I probably just read more into it than necessary. I loved Kris' battle btw waking a serene and beautiful Adam or breathing. Who needs air when youve got Adam?
I enjoyed much more than that but I figure I should quit somewhere.
I know you dont have to or necessarily able to but you should try to continue this. causeiliketotallyreallydesperatelywantyouto!

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scruffybunny May 18 2009, 06:52:43 UTC
I'm glad you enjoyed it!

I have a theory that Adam is a clingy sleeper, whereas Kris is a sprawler. I don't know how I came to these conclusions, but for the purpose of this fic it seemed to fit.

Kris is just fun to write. Musically, he obviously puts a lot of thought into what he's doing, and I think I was trying to translate that into every day life. May or may not have been successful. I dunno.

Please, please. Squee away. The squees keep the plot bunnies happy.

I'm actually playing around with a third installment as I type this. I can't promise anything, because I'm not sure about the direction it's going to take. Also, when I make promises, writer's block kicks my door in and crashes on my couch. *nervous glance at the WWI story.*

Anyway, I'll stop blabbering on and on now. Again, thanks for the review!

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equus07 May 18 2009, 14:49:50 UTC
Now that you say that, I can imagine the same thing. At least I dont see Kris as being a clingy in his sleep but Adam is man of many sides and he could go either way.
Again, no proof to back this up but umm... give me time? heh :P

I think you did a good job in bringing Kris thought process to the table. I believe it and enjoyed it.

Okay, so no promises but if WB decides its going to take an unwelcome visit, call me. Homie dont play that!

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ellelee May 17 2009, 20:17:12 UTC
Nooo, sleeping and cuddling fic strings are made of AWESOMESAUCE. AW-SOME-SAUCE. *nodnodnod* And this is so cute. And poor Kris, and poor Adam. Mostly poor Adam XD

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scruffybunny May 18 2009, 06:54:57 UTC
True. But for practical purposes, I feel that the arc deserves some sort of project title. Like, "Operation: Cuddle," or "Operation: Awkwardsauce."

It sounds more official, I think. XD

Aww. Every time I go back and read any of my stories, a little voice in the back of my head is like, "You are SO unfair to Adam."

And I'm like, "Yeah, you're probably right."

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ellelee May 18 2009, 08:44:12 UTC
Let Operation: AWKWARDSAUCE begin! XDDDDD

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phelps01 May 17 2009, 22:56:25 UTC
I loved this I like how it was in Kris's point of view : )

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scruffybunny May 18 2009, 06:56:18 UTC
thanks!

I generally stray towards the Adam point of view, because in my head I feel that Adam is the actual version of the persona that I would like to own. So maybe I'm living vicariously through Fic!Adam? I dunno.

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ljelliez May 18 2009, 03:22:37 UTC
“I love you, man, but I love oxygen, too.”

^ lolz, that was cute!

I've said it before and I'll say it again; you write the best kradam!fluff fics. :D

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scruffybunny May 18 2009, 06:56:51 UTC
Aaaand blushing.

Thanks so much!

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