A beam of sunlight powers through the windows and hits Kris directly in the face. He closes his eyes tighter, unwilling to move. He’s comfortable, after all. It’s funny; he can’t remember the beds being this warm or this comfortable before. As he gives up on holding onto sleep, he begins to notice some things.
First of all, there’s a weight on his
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Also, I read a lot of fics where Kris is always freaking out, and Adam is cool-as-a-cucumber calm. So I figured that it would be fun to play with that dynamic. I dunno.
Anyway, glad you enjoyed it!
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A small sound, like the one youd give in sympathy left my mouth when I read this: But as soon as he makes a noticeable motion, Adam frowns in his sleep and reflexively tightens his grip, drawing Kris’ back flat against his chest.
I probably just read more into it than necessary. I loved Kris' battle btw waking a serene and beautiful Adam or breathing. Who needs air when youve got Adam?
I enjoyed much more than that but I figure I should quit somewhere.
I know you dont have to or necessarily able to but you should try to continue this. causeiliketotallyreallydesperatelywantyouto!
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I have a theory that Adam is a clingy sleeper, whereas Kris is a sprawler. I don't know how I came to these conclusions, but for the purpose of this fic it seemed to fit.
Kris is just fun to write. Musically, he obviously puts a lot of thought into what he's doing, and I think I was trying to translate that into every day life. May or may not have been successful. I dunno.
Please, please. Squee away. The squees keep the plot bunnies happy.
I'm actually playing around with a third installment as I type this. I can't promise anything, because I'm not sure about the direction it's going to take. Also, when I make promises, writer's block kicks my door in and crashes on my couch. *nervous glance at the WWI story.*
Anyway, I'll stop blabbering on and on now. Again, thanks for the review!
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Again, no proof to back this up but umm... give me time? heh :P
I think you did a good job in bringing Kris thought process to the table. I believe it and enjoyed it.
Okay, so no promises but if WB decides its going to take an unwelcome visit, call me. Homie dont play that!
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It sounds more official, I think. XD
Aww. Every time I go back and read any of my stories, a little voice in the back of my head is like, "You are SO unfair to Adam."
And I'm like, "Yeah, you're probably right."
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I generally stray towards the Adam point of view, because in my head I feel that Adam is the actual version of the persona that I would like to own. So maybe I'm living vicariously through Fic!Adam? I dunno.
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^ lolz, that was cute!
I've said it before and I'll say it again; you write the best kradam!fluff fics. :D
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Thanks so much!
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