I think that this is close to the best thing I've ever read of yours. The honesty of it is surreal, and the concept refreshing. I wish to see the models that appear on every magazine, in thier more natural/ugly state. No one is truly that perfect, why do we pretend like they are.
you are a powerful writer...notaboyscoutJuly 9 2004, 22:56:22 UTC
your story blew me away.
I wanted to point out an apparent typo as well, in the last sentence of the sixth paragraph counting the paragraph after exalted beauty as paragraph one, it reads: He could not look anywhere without the remind of an intimate moment of creation:
I was also unsure if the colon at the end of that sentence was deliberate.
I enjoyed reading your work very much :) Can't wait to read more.
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I hope that you continue with this.
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I wanted to point out an apparent typo as well, in the last sentence of the sixth paragraph counting the paragraph after exalted beauty as paragraph one, it reads:
He could not look anywhere without the remind of an intimate moment of creation:
I was also unsure if the colon at the end of that sentence was deliberate.
I enjoyed reading your work very much :) Can't wait to read more.
XXXOOO,
Ryan
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