Fic: The Life You Save/8

Apr 16, 2011 10:17

Title: The Life You Save
Author: Scribere Est Agere
Pairing: Goren/Eames
Spoilers: After Purgatory
Rating: M
Disclaimer: These characters do not belong to me.

Summary: May be your own.

Our dream of safety has to disappear )

fanfiction, the life you save

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ckofshadows April 16 2011, 14:59:39 UTC

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scriberestagere April 16 2011, 16:21:04 UTC
I love you. That is all. Oh, and mayhaps an Epilogue? At some point? Would that convince you I'm not...uh...racist?

<3

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scriberestagere April 17 2011, 01:06:09 UTC
I also think I need to learn how to "fan my vagina." Like, soon.

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vdofan May 11 2011, 21:16:00 UTC
An Epilogue would be good! Will you write one??

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scriberestagere April 17 2011, 13:41:09 UTC
Thank you, ever so much. I'm really sad it's done. I had too much writing it <3

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mingsmommy April 16 2011, 17:39:40 UTC
This was lovely...the whole story, from the first word to the last.

Her description of what she remembers is absolutely stunning. And the sex is so beautifully written.

You have such an amazing way of shaping sentences...your writing is just gorgeous. I love every word.

You are amazing.

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scriberestagere April 17 2011, 13:42:18 UTC
Thank you, as always, for your lovely, encouraging feedback. I appreciate it so much! I'm really quite depressed now that it's finished. Maybe the new season will inspire me, once again :)

Thank you! <3

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mingsmommy April 17 2011, 13:47:09 UTC
It's a little like postpartum depression, isn't it?

Every single time I write a multi-chapter I get the blues afterwards and feel like I'll never write again. Eventually, I get over it, but still after creating a story and putting it out in to the world, I often feel creatively dead.

I hope you find your inspiration again when you're ready.

How are you doing otherwise? Okay I hope. I've been keeping you in my thoughts and prayers.

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scriberestagere April 17 2011, 13:52:45 UTC
This! Exactly this! You pour so much into a story, and I enjoy writing these two SO much...and then the story ends and you're like...Now what?? Sigh. I don't write very many multi-chapter fics, and now I realize why, lol. It's too damn depressing when it's done. Meh.

I'm doing...all right, I think. Day by day is kind of my new motto. If I think about the future too much, my head (and heart) might explode. Day. By. Day. Thank you for the good wishes -- I can always use them :)

<3

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letsallchant April 16 2011, 21:39:48 UTC
*sighs wristfully*

This was all so lovely, suspenseful, horrific, sad and hopeful - seriously, it had everything. I loved it :) This one's definitely going into my ~misty water-colored memories. Seriously, your writing is beautiful, you had me hanging onto every word. It was worth the wait. <3

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scriberestagere April 17 2011, 13:43:18 UTC
I'm sighing wistfully, too. I'm depressed! It's finished! NOW what will I do?? I'm not cleaning my house, that's for damn sure! Anyway, thank you for reading, and leaving this wonderful review. I'm so happy you liked <3

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daystarsearcher April 17 2011, 00:22:14 UTC
My favorite part would have to be Eames' big block o'text where she just avalanches and buries Goren in all the sensory details of that memory. It was incredibly evocative and emotional and POW!

I also liked Possessive!Goren (always a treat), Eames' reaction to Possessive!Goren, the way they inched and hedged and worried their way to where they were (including the big long wait before even saying anything about what they'd said to each other), and how once they were together all the hedging and worrying fell by the wayside.

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scriberestagere April 17 2011, 13:45:39 UTC
Oh god. ONCE AGAIN you picked out my absolute favourite part of the story, lol, and quite possibly the entire series. And, I added it right at the very end. I knew I wanted her to be able to prove to him that she wasn't all drugged up and loopy, but I didn't quite know how to show it...until THAT little inspiration came to me. So, thank you! I'm really glad you liked. Now I have to go cry in my crying room, for I am sad it's done. Bleah. I hope the new season will make me want to write more <3<3

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