POI FIC: Praying in agony on waiting shores

Feb 18, 2012 21:37

Title: Praying in agony on waiting shores
Fandom: Person Of Interest
Characters: Finch, Reese (gen)
Rating: G
Word count: 1,000
Notes: Written for the picfor1000 challenge. Thank you to everyone who helped me out with ideas. I really appreciate all your amazing insight ( Read more... )

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kelly_girl February 19 2012, 03:18:04 UTC
Awww. I like this. Harold waiting, but it's not a sad waiting. Just like he's on pause until John comes back. Lovely.

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zootsuitzappy February 19 2012, 03:59:41 UTC
This had my throat tighten up. Beautifully written, and terribly sad. Wonderful job, simply wonderful. I love how Harold kept the boots, something to give back when John returns. I personally hope John *does* return.

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dien February 19 2012, 05:09:41 UTC
*snifffff!* *clutches at heart*

Oh man you've gotta give us the sequel where John returns. Please?

This is lovely though, if hard on the heart. Beautiful details.

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no_detective February 19 2012, 05:29:47 UTC
Oh my god, I think I'm still so raw from Reichenbach that I nearly started weeping over this - even though it's definitely a hopeful story, and chances are John has had to fake his death to get away from his former CIA buddies - but the thought of Finch waiting for him and not knowing... oh, my heart!

Beautifully done, my dear. <3

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alizarin_nyc February 19 2012, 07:05:23 UTC
Gorgeous piece of writing, very tender and hopeful, but definitely of the SAD variety.

the monotony of salvation unrelieved by a dry sense of humor on the other end of the phone, a soft voice that always seems to be insinuating-something.

Excellent description of their phone sex banter.

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