Bandom FIC: Operation Jealousy

[scribblinlenore]

Title: Operation Jealousy
Fandom: Bandom (with a splash of House)
Pairings/Characters: Pete/Patrick (with a guest cameo by Dr. Gregory House)
Rating: NC-17
Summary: Patrick has to make Pete jealous. Doctor's orders.
Word count: ~9,000
Disclaimer: Not real. Not mine. Never happened.

Author's note: This is for swanswan who gave me the prompts "jealous!

Comments

[mojojessjo]

This may have been the most adorable and amusing thing I've seen in a long time! I love the little bit of crossover with House and his prescribing jealousy! Patrick's bitchiness (which is something that I seriously wish more authors would touch on in fics) and Pete's sneaky way to deal with the older guy made me glee!

Loved this so much!

[scribblinlenore]

Yay! I'm so glad you liked this. Imagining young Patrick as a holy terror was too amusing for words. I had so much fun writing this. *g*

Thanks so much for the feedback!

[athenejen]

Okay, so if your plan is basically to write Pete/Patrick crossovers with all the best TV shows, then let me just say that I am a million percent on board. Maybe even two million percent.

I enjoyed this stupid amounts -- your Patrick is so delightfully (homicidally) teenagery and your Pete is so Pete. (And your House is so House! *glee*) Adorable and totally charming.

[scribblinlenore]

Hee! I don't know why I started thinking about bitchy young Patrick meeting up with Dr. House, but once I started, I just couldn't stop. Really, Pete and Patrick just go with everything. Quite possibly I may end up crossing them over with all my favorite shows. :)

[auntpurl]

Adorable and hot - I really enjoyed this. And honestly, I don't really have a bandom itch, heh. But your writing is always wonderful.

(Weensy typo - "and then he has Carlyle's tongue in this mouth" sic)

[scribblinlenore]

Ah, thanks for reading this even though bandom's not really your thing. I'm so glad you liked it. Those bandom boys are really amusing to write.

And thanks for catching that typo!

[scribblinlenore]

Hee! What good are husbands, really, if they can't be bartered on the Internet?

I'm so glad you liked the story! Pissy young Patrick was really a hoot to write.

[lyricsof_poison]

i love you more than words can ever describe.
this was so so so perfect and funny and cute and hot and <3

[scribblinlenore]

Yay! I'm so glad you liked the story. Writing pissy young Patrick was really, really amusing.

Thanks so much for the feedback!